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The problem is that none of this brings us any closer to what's going on. What would make cadets quit at a time when they should have been home free? And HOW - IN - THE - HELL is that making the officers money? ...Blackmail?

Another 5 stars, you confusing bastard.

@Freya - Thank you, my friend. I treasure your input more than you know.

I really liked it, looking forward to more.

I walked in to my wife's closet once to find a pair of her shoes. I feared for my life and was tempted to call search and rescue to come for me. My clothes are relegated to another closet as there is no room in the walk in. She’s happy so I’m happy, but don’t dare use the good towels....

You can't leave us hanging like this hurry up and write the next installment,

I think that worked well as a follow on story. 5*.

People forget that they are reading a story on here, makes me laugh that they think she couldn't act like that and get away with it.

The story was a good one, nicely written

please tell me that you have actual talent at writing anything other than comic books. This waste of time is an afront to the original author.

Through two parts, this series reads very natural and moves along at a great unrushed pace. It feels like a genuine size-curious seduction is taking place.

I'm sure the series will jump the shark as it's an eleven-part series and it will be tough to keep it interesting without raising...

Great story

Hope there will be another series to continue this, since you it said this is the conclusion of this one.

More of a stroker than your usual. Well written, of course.

I wonder if his secret space will ever be figured out by the healer or his familiar ? GR8 chapter .

I think in their monthly talks she should have been asking how his healing was going and if there was a chance. And he could have told her not to give up on him. Good story glad it ended the way it did

Wow - Best chapter to date. 4.8*

Gets better and better!

Great start! Cant wait for more!

Please continue!

This comment is from the author, Tanglosax. First, I apologize, completely and unreservedly (Picture John Cleese in Fish Called Wanda making his apology to Kevin Kline; google if you need to), for confusing the football Gators and Seminoles. I do enjoy college football and should...

I like this one, even though you cheat with not telling how he managed to pull it off, except for the birth control pills.

Great start, love the detail in the writing. Thank you for sharing your talent and insight. J2

The comeback tour was engaging and enjoyable, but purely from a readers pov, the lead up to his first marriage breaking down was probably too long imho, it could have been half the length you made it and it would still have conveyed the upset and loss it brought to both parties.

Cheers,...

Good story right up until the end. Dad is an enabler, this wouldn't be the last time he gives her money or support. Maybe dear old dad has more money than balls so the 100K Suzzy slut made off with didn't bother him and another 25K is chicken feed. Doesn't make sense but what the...

Here's how I imagine it sometimes goes down:

NTH walks into the LW Tropes store. The shopkeep glances up from his magazine.

"Help you?"

"Just browsing."

NTH strolls the aisles, examining the fine porcelain figures that line the shelves. He pauses next to a piece that catches...

Nice!

Loving it so far. Well done

Simply beautiful.

I don’t know how I feel about this story . I mean the only reason why Hank did (or didn’t do) what he did was because he saw Maggie on video naked jerks off a guy and getting her naked tits mauled by another . Nope, didn’t see her suck the guy but everything seemed to point to that’s...

Love these two main characters and their evolving relationship and now a bit of outside drama appears (reappears?). As a near hopeless romantic, I am hopeful.

Please, keep this story going!

Wrong category. Should be in the rape category.

A very good story overall. The happy ending for everyone was nice. It flowed nicely and it seemed real as it took time to sort everything out.

A couple of side comments:

When Jim mulls "could he ever love Linda again? PROBABLY not." PROBABLY????

It was very convenient that Linda...

I almost stopped reading when he lapsed into full martyr mode at the hospital. Really? After the way she behaved? Uh, no. Also, I'm not sure the author kept in mind the ages of the children - 14 and 12. A 14 year old girl having to go play at the park? Really? The obligatory happy...

Intensely erotic while we gain a glimpse of your characters. On board to see where you take this cruise.

Love where this is going.