A Fragile Cup of Witch's Brew

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Months later I learned that Dee had a baby girl. They named her Sybil. Apparently her hair was coming in bright orangy red.

I went to visit mom and daughter. They were both doing well. I brought baby Sybil two small gifts.

A froggy teething toy and Sybil's wooden Love flute.

"It's from your great-aunt Sybil," I whispered to the baby as she chewed on the toy while proud mom watched on, "she wanted you to have it." Her big brown eyes stared at the flute.

My lips tingled as I kissed her little forehead.

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113 Comments
BaggedBagged4 months ago

Beautifully written

TulipfuzzTulipfuzz6 months ago

Such a well written story. The surprise ending was no surprise. AAA+++

UncertainTUncertainT6 months ago

That was magic.

OlgreyfoxOlgreyfox6 months ago

I first read this magnificent story 3 yrs ago and it made for a hard read for me and brought multiple tear duct draining as I progressed through the story. During my re-reading I just about got completely dehydrated through my tear ducts and blowing my wet nose. God!! What a magnificent, wonderful, great scribble!!! KUDOS once again.

Mostly_SQMostly_SQ8 months ago

Wow! Its been a long time since I was so enveloped by a story!

It is Very Well Written! And laughed I cried & as an added bonus was horny as hell !

Rwa_jimRwa_jimabout 1 year ago

Great story omg it’s perfection

PatrickThomasPatrickThomasabout 1 year ago

10 stars. Thanks so much. A lovely story.

OU8ME2ICOU8ME2ICover 1 year ago

What a wonderful story. i appreciate all the effort and time you placed in incorporating song lyrics, Sybil and Sax’s discussion about Sybil’s abilities and her friends like Hess and Meyer.

ChopinesqueChopinesqueover 1 year ago

Wow.

My second reading of this wonderful story. I cannot imagine any criticism finding fault with any aspect of it. Eclare, thank you!

Contemplationk2Contemplationk2almost 2 years ago

Absolutely superb

Thank you for your creative spirit

The intimacy is terrific

The spiritual perspective is beautiful

SailorDougSailorDougover 2 years ago

Such a well written story. Draws you in so that you want finish. Just beautiful!

billymotobillymotoover 2 years ago

Amazing, enchanting and engrossing. I couldn't put it down and was saddened when it ended. Probably the best storey that I have ever read. On a scale of one to five, I have to rate it a ten.

technofrog2002technofrog2002over 2 years ago

I read this story a along time ago. And I decided to re-read it again, I think the second time was even better than the first. It is the most emotional and powerful story I have ever read on this site. You’re clearly an amazing writer. I agree with one of the other commenters that it would be great to have read another story to follow the niece. Im sure that would be an amazing story too. I hope to see more of your stories against the future . I would love to know what your inspiration is for your stories.

lawoftheheartlawoftheheartover 2 years ago

You can't ask people to give you a "five". What presumption. I mean, you can ask people to give you a "five", but then this is judging yourself, not letting yourself be judged. Why bother to let yourself be judged at all, if what counts for you is how you judge yourself. I gave you a "one", based solely on your circular narcissism. Plus, your story is too sweet for words.

immagetitimmagetitover 3 years ago
Thank you

This story is truly appreciated. Thank you for sharing this to the world. It is a better place with this.

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