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The advantage being a woman and being able to experience orgasm after orgasm and still don’t need to curl in between the sheets for sleep, the sleep is for the simple minds … giggle ….. so if your are jealous you’re a simple mind, a man, and otherwise you would have enjoyed the...

Second time. Quality of writing is, as usual, supurb. Hated the story line. Like other good writers you get me all invested in the characters and their foibles. I didn’t enjoy how my guts got all twisted up.

That’s it?

A very unpleasant story--but a very good one. 5*, but I kind of wished I'd stopped reading on page 1.

5 star!

beautiful drawings !

OMG Greg! Just two days ago you were a virgin, now you've gotten 21 loads in your ass and you're extending the hours of service. If you keep this up the hotel will be able to use your ass for additional parking. I wonder if Greg's wife will ever see her naughty little slut again....

You Lucky Sleazy Bitch!!!!!!

Great premise, decent writing. Ending left a lot to be desired. Would like to know where Joy went. What happened? Hopefully she suffered after the divorce? Would like Garrett to get his comuppance too.

Nice. Please continue.

Everyone got what they deserved but I thought that the FBI involvement was a little over the top.

Sort of enjoyed the read, except for the ranting in a few places. Thanks for your writing.

OMG I went through 10 tissues on this one. So good. "Let's be gentle with one another." I love everything about this series. It's not a simple Jilling story -- the characters and themes are really deep.

Thanks @suewatcher, I’m such a huge fan of your work! I didn’t plan on doing anything with part 2, but maybe! I really hope you publish again!

Love to see we’re this leads off two. Please chapter three.

Great 5⭐️love story how their relationship grew and the love between them.

"...as if I was slow." LOL!!

What 16yo in the age of Smartphones could ever be considered "slow?"

BUSTED, Mom! 🥴🤣

This needs a part 2 asap

WOW, that was a sad story to follow, I am not sure if I could forgive such horrible treatment by a child. I guess I still at 77 yrs have a lot of growing up to do. Well done! Kudos

You would have to be super-human to want more than Kena and Iris. Very surprised about Lena seeking dominance and a bit of choking

I liked that LT found a different direction to go with for the Feb story. Particularly refreshing for me was that most of the story was just about Jim's life after the event. Most of these stories are all about his revenge or spend a long time dissecting the Jim & Linda relationship....

I know I should be better, but once i read "FBI" i decided to pass. These people are the most, uh, hypocritical people in the world so why the F would I have any sympathy or empathy. I know that makes me a bad person but I'm cool with it.

Interesting reboot and starting point. Found it to be entertaining and good storytelling with the right amount of drama and sex. Well done. Cheers

Linda deserved to be made into fertilizer. The kids deserved much better, abandoning them was cruel and cowardly. Unlike the selfish, worthless parents, the Grandparents accepted some responsibility (like loving grandparents always do) and looked after the kids. Jim gave up his sainthood...

Martian Slut Ray rears its ugly head

Great story! Thanks for all the hard work that I'm sure it took!

A fun good version ending of the classic story. I enjoyed the read.

4*

Loved this and look forward to more

WIN! Five wins, actually, and a favorite. I love Holly! She's my kind of girl, for sure.. quirky, nerdy, fun and loves sex. I'd marry that in a heartbeat.

good ending, confronting her never saying she was sorry.

Very intriguing beginning - looking forward to the next chapter.

Excellent CFMN story! I can’t understand all the negative comments. It’s not like this is some literary magazine and you’re trying to score an award. I understood every bit of the wording and grammar.. I don’t come to literotica for grammatical excellence, perfect punctuation, etc....

Original -- I like original. 5*

Very intense and enjoyable. One think though that I think would make it better is putting some layers of background behind David and giving him dialog (rather than "he said"). I look forward to the next chapter.

I do wish he was the one to use the safe word though.