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Click hereHell’s Angel
An angel born in hell
Striving to escape Satan’s spell
Conceived of passion
Forged in fire
An innocent soul
The embodiment of desire
A heart of flame burning strong
Seeking for shelter in a world gone wrong
Aimlessly wandering in darkest night
All alone her tragic plight
Fighting her demons facing her fears
Roaming and searching for someone to dry her tears
Seeking for solace, craving the light
Someone, not to save her, but simply hold her tight
Decent flow and nice, if "cliche-ish" rhymes. Once again, the search for ligth and comfort strongly shines through your poem. This time in a different setting though, someone born of darkness seeking light... I like it.