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Click hereYou were my innocence
and I chained you
I killed you
absorbed you.
I sent you to a place
that didn't exist
and told you that
Heaven was all you could
create
but you were lonely
and fell.
I let them torture you,
and change you
and make you dark.
You grew wise
you grew bitter
you grew cold.
I made you hateful
and sad
and beautiful.
I gave you everything,
which was actually nothing.
only half-baked. you have all what you want to say, but i feel it needs some reworking to get the best from the thoughts here. i also think you are quite capable of doing that.