The Girl's Devotion

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A poem of a slave girl's devotion
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A girl has come and called the favor of the Goddess
she knows not what she asked.
The intentions are true, the highest of need
Yet they quickly bring more duty.
The Goddess so kind, yet young and unsure
Brings Her knowledge to help.
While gentle considerations and honest attempts
The Goddess still wonders Her place.
Then the girl has opened, vulnerable more for Thee
The Goddess will not resist.
The truest nature has come to be, taking worry away
The hunger overwhelms.
It is when the Goddess shows this need
Her girl is not far away.
The truest of needs bring the ponderings of life
What can become is unsure.
When the Goddess holds the girl so dear
Nothing matters more.

There is a beast among the Goddess
The girl will know.
The Goddess gives its name, yet does not let it glow
The girl wants hope.
The girl is learning of the Goddess, her needs secondary
The Goddess’ delight.
When the girl craves the devotion, the curiosity comes
The girl questions.
The Goddess feels the worry, feels the resistance
She knows to push.
The Goddess grows the need of the girl, her desire
The common need about.
The girl will not live without the Goddess
The times is soon about.
The girl will find no fulfillment, no reward outside of Goddess
No servitude is better.
The Goddess will crave all of the girl, nothing left behind
The girl will give more.
For one touch of the Goddess to Her girl
Nothing else remains.

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 7 years ago
I.......

.....ddn't get to the end of this poem because it didn't engage me.....or make me want to know what happens next. Perhaps it is written for the Dominant which gives it more meaning.

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