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Click here"Oh God! Um...um. Oh God!" she said. His tongue lapped circles around her clitoris and she swayed her hips to the rhythm of his mouth. She could feel him bite and pull on her inner lips sometimes rough and other times gently.
Before too long she couldn't form words and he just kept licking her in different patterns long languorous strokes and the short frenetic strokes each sensation was driving her to new dizzying states. She looked up at the stars and realized he'd kept his promise but that she kept hers as well.
He lifted her off his face temporarily and stretched his jaw. "That was kids' stuff. I think it's time we make you howl." His voice was all gruff when he said it. He forced her to turn around and stuck his tongue up her bottom. She held on to the tree for leverage and she let him lick her the way he wanted to.
All of this male attention was just what she needed. Soon she would need him to fuck her hard and well. But at her first opportunity she was going to suck him like an anteater at a new hole.
- COMMENTS
GigiDarkalmost 12 years agoAuthorI just wanted to say thank you to all of the people who read my story. At last count I believe I had over 8000 views. Wow! I never dreamed it would get that many views. I also wanted to thank Warrenm for favoriting my story you rock! And of course I thank those of you who gave me comments - they are truly food for thought. I will use these comments to make more entertaining future submissions.
Since the competition is drawing to a close I sure would appreciate some votes if you think this was a good submission.
GigiDarkalmost 12 years agoAuthorThank you for the encouraging comments. This was my first erotic story ever. I just wrote something that I'd like to read. I was also worried about page count when I realized that my story which was only supposed to be 5 pages turned into 11. I didn't want to write a novella amidst all the great pithy stories in this competition.
GigiDarkalmost 12 years agoAuthorThanks for your comment. I tried to make it a good read. I'm sorry about the coitus interruptus. I will think about it for my other stories.
Funguy1102almost 12 years agoThe story is a great read, but the ending is unsatisfying, like coitus interruptus.
jehoramalmost 12 years agoI liked the fact that you took your time with it and let us get to know the characters. Keep up the good work!
