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Click hereChapter 4: Conclusion: Jane's view
It has now been a month since the confrontation in my apartment. We were so wrong to treat my loving master so badly. I don't know what I was thinking. Fortunately, I now realize how much I love Mike. I will die for him. Fortunately, he loves me as well since we fuck regularly. I love it so much to serve him with mouth, pussy or ass.
I am not allowed to find fault with my master's behavior, but there is one thing that irks me. In the last month, I find myself insanely jealous every time I see my master with that slut Shannon. He regularly fucks her. Not only does he fuck her all the time, but he also allows Jillian and Mandy to use her as they please. One day, when he wasn't satisfied with the blow job he got from her, he even allowed our gardener to fuck her. Every day he finds new ways to humiliate and degrade her. I even help him to think up new humiliations since it is only right that she be punished for all the injustice that she has committed against my master. Maybe my jealousy is my master's way of punishing me for the wrong I have done him. If so, I will gladly bear the burden.
I must go now, my master calls. Shannon is still in his room as well. I hope he fucks me and makes Shannon lick my pussy and asshole while my master's cock is drilling into me. That always makes me cum so hard...
Author's Note:
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- COMMENTS
verbicideover 10 years agoOkay, so a fantasy story is going to have certain built in conceits that have to be accepted, but this story is built around such a ridiculous premise it isn't even funny. First off, a detective looking into a charge of shoplifting? Unless Shannon is a serial shoplifter with a well established history or tried to steal something of extreme value, a shoplifting charge is a misdemeanor offense. Second, rape and sodomy? Was this story written before the days of forensic science? Even without DNA testing, the lack of defensive wounds or presence of seminal fluids would have this accusation dismissed almost immediately with no charges filed, personal history or not. Third, how long did she stay in jail? Bonding out for a shoplifting offense is easy. The accused probably wouldn't even make it as far as being processed into a cell beyond the initial holding cell. Fourth, a coke bottle? Where would she get a coke bottle in jail? Glass can be used in suicide or homicide attempts and in US jails any item that can easily be made into a weapon is contraband.
I could go on and on about the glaring errors that make this stroy such a poor read, but I'm sure you get the picture. Now, since this author hasn't posted anything in nearly a decade this critique likely is meaningless, but if anyone reading this is thinking of submitting a story, maybe the message of research and common sense will help in crafting a better tale.
Bfreetorunover 10 years agoI am for feminists as long as they just want what is fair. Any more and I don't like their agenda. Fair is fair. I thought this story came out pretty good.
Bfreetorunalmost 12 years agoI liked the way it turned out, it serves them right. Thank you.
buttman52about 12 years agoI usually read 20/30 stories a day and found yours to be one of the better ones to read.Please keep on writing and I will keep on reading.
Anonymousover 17 years agoThis was pretty good. I enjoyed it uptil the end of the story. Your hypnosis solution was a bit too rushed and pat, and frankly, it sort of comes out of the blue. It really could use a bit better lead in and fleshing out to make the story gel better.
Otherwise, quite entertaining.
