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"Yes, M'am, i want this. i know what i'm asking for."
"Then this is going to happen, sissy, you know that, right," She demanded, Her hand suddenly gripping my balls. Hard.
"Yes, M'am, and i'm so thankful it will."
"Good bitch, now give me that pipe."
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We'd drifted into the living room, which looks out onto the street. Despite the ameliorating effects of the weed, i was still fidgety. i looked around and saw that we'd cleaned everything properly, which was slightly annoying as there was nothing for me to occupy myself with. She just grinned languidly.
Then i heard a car pull up outside. Drawing apart two of the slats in the blinds, i saw that He was here.
Spinning around, my hands to my grinning mouth, i guffawed - most unladylike -- "He drives a red Maserati!!"
Immediate laughter from the blue chair.
"Seriously, M'am, how much more of a Penthouse Letters setup is this," i giggled, flapping my hands. "I don't give a shit about cars but You have to admit this is weirdly hot."
"Yessss, sissy dear, Dr. M is a hot, French M.D. who drives a red Maserati to the homes of the bitches he's about to cuckold. Isn't that nice?"
i struggled to get my nervous, incredulous laughter under control as i heard a knock at the door.
"Get that, would you, faggot?"
End Part 1
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 6 years agoGet the door? I don't think so? Laugh, grab a garbage bag, throw her crap into it and throw her out. Done. No one is stupid enough to answer the door and risk exposure to every disease known to man. Stupid, unlikable characters doing ridiculous things.
No stars as even giving this garbage one star would be an insult to the star.
gordo12almost 7 years agoJust the outline and first couple of paragraphs were enough to make me abandon it.
As far as the category goes you need to step back and look at the larger picture. Yes LW is about swinging and swapping but it is firmly a HETERO category. 95% of the people want nothing to do with gay M/M sex. And that's the dividing line.
That's the bigger picture!
Just because you get support from other readers 5% who are gay doesn't mean it belongs there. And it has nothing to do with hating gays. I'm personally indifferent and I suspect most of the other readers are too. We just don't want it thrown in our faces.
It should have been in Gay or even Fetish. 1*
lapraline70almost 8 years agoAuthorNitro70652, your comment is interesting and has me thinking about what I've left out.
This is a true story and I wrote it as much to capture what happened because the night was so intense it's hard to keep events clear; the chronology, the images, it all blurs together so this has been a useful way to make order out of that chaos.
She wanted - and still does - this relationship. She was - and still is (as am I) - careful about how it could jeopardize our marriage, but we have a D/s, open relationship that we navigate very carefully. I'm wondering what you'd like to see in terms of her take on it.
As for the conditions I set, again, they're real and I know it's perhaps not in keeping with what we've come to expect of a bull in cuckold erotica but they stem from the same care she and I take to preserve our relationship: I didn't know the guy when we first started negotiating but I knew what would work for her and for me. I'm pretty alpha and I know how my mind and body work and if we started out as buddies, I wouldn't have been able to navigate that transition. No one would have enjoyed themselves. If he had been an asshole, he'd have been out on his ass.
I was really impressed by the care he took in the initial discussions, a detail that I omitted in order to keep things moving. His approach was actually perfect for us: Thoughtful, interested, intelligent, he wanted to make sure he understood what made each of us tick. So I told him. He makes an excellent bull and an excellent fit for us, as a result. But that's us. Everyone's different.
Plus, hey: While I like stories where the bull takes charge, relegating the husband/boyfriend to the guest room, etc, it gets a bit tired going down the same path. Here's something different. Definitely not everyone's cup of tea but that's ok. Again, it's just porn.
All that said, I'm leaving the commenting open to all - unfuckable hate nerds included (not you Nitro70652 :) they're the ones whose comments get deleted) - in hopes that I'll get more useful feedback like yours that I can use to improve this story.
Thanks again for the feedback and the vote.
Molly
Nitro70652almost 8 years agoFar be it from Me to dictate to anyone how things should work within a relationship. I find it odd that for a submissive sissy faggot cuckold who wants this apparently more than his "mistress"..... he sure has an awful lot of rules and direction how it should go and how the "bull" is allowed to behave/control things. Just find it hard to believe that any Dominant bull would come into such a session being directed by the lowest ranking person in the room. Again, just My opinion.
4 stars so far.
briefloveralmost 8 years agoPlease continue, great story so far.
