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Click here"Damn it," swore Jamie. "Stay here, all of you! And you two," he pointed at Sandra and Rose, "guard her! Don't let her do anything but sit quietly!" He dashed out of the room, followed by Sandra calling after him to at least put his pants back on. He stopped halfway down the stairs, returned to the room, and felt decidedly silly, dressing while three gorgeous girls ate him up with their eyes. His cock started to react and he had trouble zipping up. Finally, he managed. He went out the back door and over the fence. When he got to his room, he replayed the wiretap of Helena's phone, that he was recording on his computer, just in case something went very wrong and posterity got curious, someday.
His face turned red as he listened to the sounds he made during sex. He half doubted someone had tampered with the recording in the meantime. "I don't sound like a dying elk while I fuck," he mumbled aloud, in an offended tone. The recording revealed that he did in fact ask her and that she did say 'yes', completing the ritual. He felt blessed relief. The orgasm was so strong and overwhelming, he completely missed his own mouth talking. He replayed it thrice and then set his computer about making a hard delete of the file. He was giddy, at having caught Worth, while he was exiting his house. By the time he climbed over the fence, he was merely glad. Entering her house, his joy dissipated, and by the time he climbed to her bedroom, his earlier misgivings were back in full force. "What have you done," he reproached himself, in his own mind. He looked to his three slaves, each smiling at him as they regarded him with 'come hither' eyes, and felt only remorse. "I'm a monster," he thought to himself. "I'm worse than they were."
Rose was dressed and her hair was all but dry. Helena was still naked, her flesh glistening with sweat. Jamie shuddered with disgust as he realized that, by fucking Helena, he had been where Chris Welling had also been. He stood in a corner of the room as he spoke, "I've done you all wrong. Sonya too. You wronged me first, but I've really taken things too far."
The girls disagreed with him and professed their love for him, but he silenced them with a raised hand. "I'm not discussing this with you. It is what it is. We need to figure out how to cast the bodily modification spell that enslaved the two of you," he indicated Rose and Sandra, "and word the price so you two get released from slavery to me." The two girls looked like he had struck them. "We also need to put our heads together and figure out a way to undo the damage I've done to Sonya. Helena, I'll keep, at least for the time being."
Sandra opened her pretty, little mouth to speak, but Rose cut her off with a touch on the shoulder. She walked to Jamie and made a very compelling argument that he should keep the four of them forever and that they would make it infinitely worth his while. She pointed out that the four of them had it coming, having so evilly drained him of life force without so much as a 'by your leave', and that he was so tired from spellcasting, that he should go home and sleep on things. Jamie found no fault to her reasoning, so he left Helena's house.
He climbed the fence, for the fourth time that evening, and grunted as he landed on his side of it. "Rose wasn't wrong when she said I was bone tired," he thought to himself. However, the rest of what she said, Jamie couldn't even remember her exact wording, he only knew he didn't really agree with it. He puzzled over why he went along with what she said, when he couldn't even remember how she phrased it. By the time he got to his back door, the fog of charms Rose put in his mind burned away. Jamie was stunned to realize his devoted, loving slave had used charm magic on his mind. "Holy shitfuck charmslinging cuntwhore of a witch" he whispered to himself.
He twisted around only to hear, more than see, Rose's car driving off down Helena's street. He growled in anger and pulled out his phone. He pressed a button and Rose's phone was dialed. As soon as the line was established, Jamie hissed out, "I order you to never, ever cast any kind of charm magic or compulsion on me! In fact, you will never, ever cast any magic on my mind! Is that clear?!"
"Yes, Master," answered Sandra meekly.
"Where's Rose," he angrily asked.
"Right here, Master," she said, timidly. "She's driving."
"Put this phone against her ear and don't let her avoid listening to me," he ordered. Jamie waited a second, before saying, "You will never, ever cast a spell on my mind! No charms, no illusions, no compulsion, no anything! Is that clear?!"
"Yes, Master," replied a stricken Rose.
"Good," Jamie calmed down some. He was truly bone tired from that tremendous orgasm earlier. He decided he needed some sleep, after all. "Get some sleep, the five of us will meet at lunch tomorrow, at school. Tell the others." He hung up and went inside. Having five sexy slaves seemed to be more trouble than it was worth. He wondered if he had dug himself into a hole too deep to climb back out of.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoStatutory rape is when the “victim” is willing, but under the age of consent. What Chris did was actual rape: forcing someone to participate in sexual activities.
Anonymousover 5 years agoit is interesting that he felt such anger at Chris for raping Liv and yet he raped Helena and felt justified and proud of his actions. The main character seems to be your cliche power mad mind control character and then he suddenly discovers his conscience over mind wiping one of his witches. He seems to flip flop a lot on morality never really picking out wrong from right. I did enjoy the justice that the M.C. imposed on Chris and his two accomplices who are apparently as stupid as Chris to keep a recording to identify who perpetrated that horrible act. All rapists should be castrated and I don't mean chemically.
Anonymousover 8 years agoDude, I'm not sure what I think of the story line, it seems to be a typical mind control one, I won't say rape, yet. Mind control stories are about getting someone to do something they would not normally do. That being said, I caught at least 2 times the use of the word "than" instead of "then", a real buzzkill.
Hiding_in_Portlandover 8 years agoSorry, but I have to say that I completely hated your story. Though I do think that you are a talented writer. I just hate rape fetishes and that is all this story is, one big magical rape fetish.
searchingforperfectionover 9 years agoI'm glad you are repositioning Jamie so that he is trying to undo the disproportionate harm that he's done. I would have stopped reading, otherwise.
Personally, I need to find at least one sympathetic major character to keep me interested.
sycksyckoover 10 years agoAuthorYou kind of didn't read the chapter till the end, there. She IS under his power, they all are. I just submitted chapter three, that I wrote alongside this one, so that should be up as soon as the powers that be approve of it. You should read it, might find it an interesting read.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI agree with the basic premise, but modifications could be made. He should have kept Helena, had his fun with the others, maintained control but allowed them to keep their intelligence but only to ever use their magical knowledge and talent to his own benefit. As they are, their behavior is too noticable to the outside world. Remember, he only told one of them to act normally during the day. He could have simply given them the desire to be submissives to him as a Dom. That way they could have normal lives at schools, families, and careers that he as Master might have found useful in future years. And that would have alleviated the guilt about destroying other human beings. It appears that Helana actually wishes to be his companion longterm and expresses her love for him, but he needs at the end to discover if she is under his magical powere or if she is now performing an act while plotting her revenge. Just some thoughts.
Anonymousover 10 years agoPlease, don't believe overly critical people. Your story IS good, could there be improvement, yes. I agree with another poster but petulant is not quite right. I felt that he went over the top in punishment. It seem to me a boy who would regret taking someone's mind would have conscience to find a better punishment. You had the thought to let your character object and rightly. Most of us can entertain MC fantasies but I do not read or stop when I detect misogyny, as it ruin the read for me. I see potential in your writing and I would like to see a conclusion to this story. I like the reveal of the crime and his thoughtfulness to not forget friends in and seek justice for it, bravo. Again, press-on finish this interesting story.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI like your story. You start with a generic 'highschool nerd encounters magic' but then build an interesting plot with some twists; especially due the fact that Jamie discovers his conscience he feels more like a real person. Please continue.
P.S.: The only glaring flaw is the title, I don't like it all.
