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Click here"Fuck this shit! What was I thinking? That I had to go around the world and chase down the things that go bump in the night to atone for my misdeeds? What misdeeds?" He pointed at Sonya and Helena. "You two had this coming to you! This is actually too mild a punishment for you both! I'll think of something worse, don't worry. One thing's for certain, I don't feel any guilt about you two! Not anymore! Not even a bit. Now you," he pointed at Sandra, "you fucking like this, don't you?" She nodded. "Well, there you go! Dream come true for a teenage submissive slut! Nothing to feel guilty about!"
He looked Rose over and asked, "What was old, pre-ritual Rose going to do with me, if the ritual had gone off without a hitch?"
She looked pensive for a moment and then shrugged. "She would have ignored you," she said. "She didn't really care if you were alive or dead, so long as she could drain your life force to make her boobs grow."
Jamie faltered, somewhat, but continued in his irate vein, "Nothing much to feel guilty about there, either! You got what was coming to you, too! Didn't you?!" He shook his head to himself and took a few deep, calming breaths. He seized Sandra's hand and dragged her to one of the bedrooms. "Come on! I'm gonna treat you like a sex slave for the rest of this day and the whole night to come!"
He knew, in his heart of hearts, that he would never truly feel like what he did to the girls wasn't bad, but he felt he now had a healthy perspective on things. He wasn't going to go running around the world and hunting dangerous things because he had to "make amends for his evil deeds". If he was going to go stop bad guys and save innocent people, he was going to do so at his own discretion and for no other reason than the joy that doing good would bring to his heart.
Sandra sat meekly on the bed and he watched her skin flush with arousal. How could he have shared her with the other girls? She was the first girl he had ever fucked and remembered it afterwards. She was his first. The days of valuing Helena above Sandra were over and done with, as far as he was concerned. He bent down and cupped her chin, tilting her face back and planting a tender kiss on her lips.
"You have been a naughty little girl, slave," he said, with a playful voice. "Remove your pants and bend over the bed's footboard for a spanking."
Sandra's lips curled into a small grin, for but a moment, before she affected a frightened visage and obeyed his order with wide-eyed hesitation. The smell of her wet pussy wafted from her panties. Jamie grinned as the tanned, sweet ass was presented for his attentions. He was going to fuck the day's misery away.
Life was good.
- COMMENTS
bigtasty101about 3 years agoI agree with some of the comments. He changed one to be the perfect lover then discards her.
But I'd also like to know what section thought and especially the suit when they found out that Jamie and co had not only found the guy they were hunting but freed all the souls and got a full confession of all his misdeeds.woukd the suit change its mind about getting rid of Jamie or at least put it on hold. Also I find that him always charging in to conflicts about stupid. I think he would do more research and not always rash action. Like when he got the pump. He saw pictures of ugly women. Do after defeating the pump get info before destroying the contracts.
Anonymousover 5 years agoOK yes Jamie mind controlled Helena Worth and three other magic users and I am not sure I can call mind wiping Sonya ( i think that was the one) self defense, that was pure cruelty. That being said Jamie does seems to feel actual honest contrition over his actions in changing the four girls going so for as to be physically ill when faced with his bad decisions. Why does he not contact Alice Worth after he beat her so easily at the end of chapter four? Alice wants her daughter back and will do anything or almost anything to help solve the enslavement spell problem (and maybe get one of her own ;p sorry I like m/d stuff). Even if she can't help right away it will help placate Alice, probably, and get an entire coven working on how to break a magical contact and not kill the girl. It seems to me that most of Jamie's current problems are based around his inability to think rationally when talking to powerful people. The suit could have been made into a powerful connection even sans the contracts but Jamie had to keep antagonizing the character so now every encounter in the future will be tainted by his temper tantrum cutting off a potentially fun arc, is the suit female and if yes is she hot arc will be much harder to pull off smoothly.
just my thoughts I know its years too late oh well
Omniferisover 6 years agoI understand some of what he was feeling when he found out what they were going to do to him. But why does he go from an ideal character somebody can get behind then turn into the biggest dick.
superfeluously_ealmost 10 years agoJamie is being a little bitch. Granted he's 18 which gives him leeway, which by the way drives me up the wall because I can't consider him a fully rational person, being only 18, and seeing his irrational behavior still pisses me off.
Granted most of the girls were grade-A psycho bitches, but punishing them now is like punishing a person, who after having a brain transplant, for the misdeeds of the previous brain. That's just as fucked up as what the girls were doing. It's irrational and cruel.
The girls love and protect him now. Treating them this way is defies reason.
Love the story though. One of the best I've read on here! Bravo!
jpz007ahrenabout 10 years agoLol, I'm so impatient. You got us so addicted with the close posts and now the delay! Its fine of course, just want to make sure more is coming xD. Either way, great story
Anonymousover 10 years agoYour on the mark especially the way you spelled it out in your own comment. I found myself enjoying the arcs that the characters with a choice are going through. Very fine story telling keep it up.
Ferrumitzalover 10 years agoI definitely thought he was using his powers to search for her when he got the super erection.
Not being perfect is a great thing, but how it's illustrated can be offputting sometimes. I guess that's the hardest part about writing a story.
Very much looking forward to the next installment so we can see more of what's developing. This could conceivably go on for months, with a new adventure every week as far as I'm concerned.
sycksyckoover 10 years agoAuthorI guess I messed up. His hard on was from the simple fact that he was fantasizing about Arlene, his long time object of worship, and his body has been trained for marathon sessions. There was no scrying involved. Just him sitting on his bed and imagining things and then reacting poorly to them.
Anyhow, the kids are off to college in the next chapter and Jamie's eyes are going to get all opened up with all the possibilities that lay before him, and his moods will stabilize. And no, he's not going to rape and wipe some woman, though someone else is!
I am writing an eighteen year old boy whose world got rocked and his life turned upside down, he has to have time to work out his kinks and recalibrate his concept of reality, while still trying to find his place in the world, and flying off the handle in a stupid, seemingly unconnected to anything, rage is one of the ways eighteen-year old boys cope with doing that.
I feel that him being self-assured and having a perfect perspective on things might make for a smoother read, but definitely not realistic. I prefer my protagonists to be the kind of people you just wanna smack upside the head, sometimes. Even if you love them to bits. Perfect people are not to be found in my writing.
Chapter six will be delayed until I decide just how badly Jamie loses in it. I don't wanna take everything from him, but the piper is coming and he wants to get paid. And Jamie's overconfidence generates interests!
I invite you to leave your thoughts & suggestions on it in the comments!
Ferrumitzalover 10 years agoGood stuff, minus the temper-tantrums. Jamie's so smart sometimes, yet goes off in these childish fits? I never really understood the guilt he was feeling for making the girls his slaves. Like was mentioned in this chapter, he was acting purely in self defense.... so what was the problem? Even a dorky kid knows that saving their own life is an alright thing to do.
I did agree with his regret that pussy was so easily found now. For most men, the chase is half the fun. Having a bevy of beautiful women at your beck and call could get rather old after awhile, and he needs to have something that occupies his mind. A good hobby would be either computers or hunting monsters. Either one would work.
I think a big part of his problem has been things coming so easily, for the most part. It didn't take much for him to get his magic. Then it didn't take much to get his millions. Then it didn't take much to get Section off his back. It might have seemed like a lot, but all of this has happened in just 6 relatively short chapters. Less than six months, according to Jamie, to get to where he is now, and no real harrowing parts to the adventure.
Like MoL said, I thought the everlast hard-on was a result of his touching the emotions of whoever he was 'scrying' and didn't think it warranted as much time as you gave it. To go off on the self-loathing thing, again, really through me for a loop.
My thoughts for the future episodes, he needs to find another girl to conquer. She doesn't need to be enslaved, but I think he needs to spend some quality time without his slaves. This would allow him to practice his magic and have some fun. Maybe boink a big CEO just for kicks and then make them forget it all happened.
Whatever he does, I think he needs to put the slaves in the background for awhile. Most folks don't hang around each all the time, so it's no worry that things are getting rough between all of them. Have them go to school and develop lives outside the magic realm so Jamie is alone for a bit of the day/week.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI agree, he's acting immensely childish for someone who supposedly has overcome many challenges in his life. The temper tantrums leave a sour note.
