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Click here"I love you, Jake," was the last thing she said before she drifted off to sleep.
"I love you too, Em," I said, kissing the top of her head.
We slept like that, completely naked, our arms around each other. I drifted off to sleep thinking, I'll never look at thunder storms the same way again.
And I doubted Emily would be scared of them any more, either...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 15 years agotht was like the best story ever it made me so excited n i luv all ur stories!!!
Anonymousover 15 years agoI'm almost wondering who was taking notes on my first time. Right down to having gone on the Pill at age 16, but it was for regulation in my case. And yes, I'd hardly dated and had been pretty darned sheltered my whole life. It almost sounds cliche', I know, but I felt like I was reading my own life with this one. And it got me hot. ;-D I know I'll never be scared of thunderstorms ever again. Tornadoes, either.
taxpapabobover 15 years agoOh, Baby! This a GREAT, GREAT story! The sex begins with sweet, well-founded romance -- and then SUPER SEX hotter than a firecracker -- and then a sweet and gentle ending in the slumber of smiling love. I adore the whole thing.
ladymidnight89over 15 years agoI really liked this story! It was romantic, sweet, and all things cute n sexy. I also like that it sounded realistic, like it's something that actually could happen the way it did. And when I lose my virginity to my boyfriend, I hope he's a sweet as Jake was. Great job!!!
Anonymousover 16 years agoI have to say I love this story because this is kind of how I lost my virginity. It was stormy, and I was with a really good friend, who turned to an even better friend after that night LOL.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoDefinetly one of my favorites. Other than the "ooooh goooooood" kind of stuff I certainly enjoyed it. The story is wonderful. Keep up the good work.<br><br>☼ JD
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoDeliberately misspelling words to add emphasis has got to be one of my biggest pet peeves as far as writing goes. Authors have the option of italics and bold print in HTML tags, yet several chose to overload their spellcheck programs with tripe like this. It just kills the mood to see line after line of 5 word sentences that take up 15 character spaces. Your writing is too good to cheapen with these shoddy shortcuts. Please don't do it again.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoAn excellent story hindered only by a few small punctuation glitches, but the story's so good it's not worth worrying about. Not bad at all!
Anonymousabout 19 years agoGreat writing, great story, nice details, all you need is a few properly placed question marks and you are awesome!
