A Karate Love Story Ch. 02

Story Info
At the tournament, Audra and Jack grow closer.
2.1k words
4.59
19.8k
4

Part 2 of the 3 part series

Updated 09/22/2022
Created 07/18/2007
Share this Story

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here
ynona
ynona
48 Followers

I know many of you are looking for the "good stuff." I'll warn you, I like to establish the characters, setting, and premise for what happens. Just stick with me! I'll make it worth your while.

If you haven't read "A Karate Love Story, Ch. 01" yet, please do -- the character development is important.

I crave and appreciate your feedback! Please vote and leave comments. -- ynona

A Karate Love Story

Ch. 02 "The Tournament"

A confusing, exhilarating din of voices and shouts surrounded me, not assaulting my ears but rather pressing against my entire body, holding me up as if I could float into the arena rather than descend the wide ramp by foot. Sensei Tom reached back and grabbed my hand as we threaded our way through hundreds of closely-packed, slow-moving bodies. I could feel Lisa's hand on my upper arm and hoped Jack was keeping up at the rear, as the four of us tried to stay together in the crush.

My heart felt like it was going to pound its way out through my stomach in its excitement. The floor below swarmed in a riot of color as people dressed in street clothes and a wide variety of white and colored gis found their places for the morning's first events, set up their gear, and began warming up with stretches and kata. I could see why Sensei was reluctant to bring younger students -- I found myself yearning to join those gathered around the enormous mats. Not from a desire to show off, I told myself, but as a personal challenge. A quieter, more honest voice inside told me I desired to sparkle and to amaze those around me.

"Tom!" shouted a hearty, disembodied voice somewhere to the right. Sensei's hand pulled roughly out of mine, and he strode forward to bear-hug a tall, pot-bellied man who materialized from the crowd.

Sensei was grinning so widely I thought his ears would start hurting. He slapped the other man hard on the back and said, "Marcus! I haven't seen you in, what -- eight years? Nine?"

"Ten, but who's counting?" said the other man with a smirk. "I thought you didn't come to these things! Change your mind?"

Sensei glanced at us slyly, then said, "Nah, I just have some nice, incorruptible students who'd like to watch, that's all."

Marcus waggled his bushy eyebrows at us. "Incorruptible, eh? We'll just see about that! Come on, Tom, I've got some front-row seats for you and your choir of angels . . ."

A path seemed to open magically before the big man, and we made our way to the floor with little trouble. Squeezing between piles of sparring gear and gym bags, we followed him to a section of seats that faced the center mat. A group of young men and women in gis with matching insignia turned and looked at us appraisingly. As introductions were made all around, I discovered that Marcus was sensei at another dojo, and these were his students -- the best of them, at any rate. It was funny to think of this fleshy man as being not just a black belt, but a sensei, but I knew that appearances could be deceiving.

By happy coincidence, I ended up sitting by Jack. I couldn't help examining him furtively under the guise of looking around the arena. It was strange not to see him in a gi. The white uniform and black belt had always conferred a mystical aura of authority and distance on him, and seeing him in regular clothes seemed to make him more human than angel, and tantalizingly more accessible. He looked deliciously fresh-from-the-shower in his dark jeans and crisp, blue polo shirt that complemented his blue eyes. It was hard not to stare at his collar where it brushed against his tanned neck, and I couldn't help breathing slowly and deeply of his aftershave.

He turned to me with a pleasant smile and said, "So, this is your first time at tournament, isn't it, Audra?" As always, hearing him speak my name sent a thrill down my spine.

"Yes," I replied. "It looks confusing, with all these different things going on at once. It reminds me of my cousin's gymnastics meets."

"They are very similar," he said. "Would you like me to explain the rules and point systems?"

"Please!"

We spent the rest of the morning discussing the various events, critiquing competitors, and applauding everyone enthusiastically. We seemed to be in our own little bubble, surrounded by all these people and the noise, but set apart. This was the first time I had ever had a sustained conversation with him -- his correcting my movements in training didn't count -- and I found myself falling for him more every minute. We had to lean our heads close together in order to hear each other over the noise, and sometimes it was loud enough that we had to practically shout in each other's ears to be heard. Being so close to him, with our arms brushing frequently, felt comfortable and right. We weren't sempai and kohai -- senior and junior, black belt and blue -- we were a man and a woman enjoying each other's company and opinions.

A loud, clanging bell that signaled the two-hour lunch break took me by surprise. I couldn't believe we had been there four hours already! I looked around and saw Sensei down the row with Marcus and Lisa at his shoulder, signaling for us to follow. Since the crowd threatened to cut us all off, Jack grabbed my hand and began to sidestep his way toward Sensei.

I was a little surprised when we emerged from the arena and turned not toward the parking lot, but toward a nearby intersection. It made sense that we would walk to a nearby restaurant, though: the parking lot was choked with cars trying to get out. It probably would have eaten up thirty minutes going that way.

To my disappointment, Jack let go of my hand when the crowd thinned out, but he remained at my side and continued our conversation about the morning's events. Lisa walked ahead of us with two other women from Marcus' dojo, and Sensei and Marcus strolled at the front, obviously recounting old times together.

The arena itself was on the edge of downtown proper, so within a block or two, we were walking between skyscrapers twenty to fifty stories high. Even now, with the sun just past high noon, we were nicely shaded. This part of town had lots of trees and wrought-iron accents -- old-fashioned street lamps, balcony bars, and so forth -- that gave it a comfortable, old-world charm, despite the acres of glass and steel towering above us.

We turned into an alley that had been transformed into a little paradise of cobblestones and greenery that sprang up on both sides and hung from a lattice that curved overhead. Hidden speakers played cheery big-band jazz, and vari-colored lanterns hung here and there among the vines. I could see that this alley housed several restaurants -- Italian, Greek, and a couple others I couldn't quite see -- and at least one shop that I definitely wanted a closer look at later.

Sensei and Marcus led us to the Italian restaurant, and we filed in the door. This was obviously a popular place for lunch. Men and women, mostly wearing business suits, crowded the tables and booths, some chatting animatedly, some with papers and laptops, apparently on a working lunch. Marcus stopped, turned back, and gathered us all together.

"Tell ya what -- it's awful crowded, how about you all go out and get us some nice seats outside? I'll order a couple of pizzas and some drinks and meet you out there," he offered.

"That's nice of you," said Sensei with a smile. "I'll be sure to save you two seats!"

Marcus guffawed and mock-slapped Sensei on the side of the head, then turned to join the line. Grinning, Sensei jerked his head at us and led us back outside.

Halfway through the maze of tables, I saw Sensei stop abruptly, and I barely backpedaled in time to avoid stepping on the back of his shoes. His whole body seemed stiff.

"Well, well, well," I heard from up ahead. Looking around Sensei's arm, I could see a young man pushing his chair back from a table and standing to face Sensei with arms folded cockily across his chest. "If it isn't my favorite sensei. How's it goin', Tommy-boy?"

I couldn't believe anyone would dare call Sensei "Tommy-boy" in that demeaning tone. Who did this guy think he was? Jack and Lisa moved to stand on either side of Sensei, Jack surreptitiously putting himself between me and this rude guy. From the tension in their shoulders, they either knew him or could just tell that he was trouble, whoever he was.

Sensei sighed. "Hello, Trey. Here for the tournament?"

"Of course!" he said. "This is my year. You're looking at tomorrow's first-place trophy winner." His friends around the table all looked at each other and smirked.

"Confident as usual, I see," said Sensei. I could tell he really meant "arrogant," or "jerk-faced," or something much less flattering.

"With reason," Trey said, buffing his nails ostentatiously on his shirt and examining them. "So nice to see you again Jack, Lisa." He directed an obvious leer at Lisa, then seemed to notice me. "Oh, I don't recognize this one. What's your name, little kohai?"

Coming from him, kohai was less "little sister" and more "little worm that I might consider stomping one day." Sensei half-turned his head toward me and hesitated, then nodded his head slightly.

"Audra," I said tersely, not even wanting to give this jerk that much of myself.

"Au-draa," he said musingly, drawing it out a little. He stepped around Jack to get a better look at me. Jack looked as if he wanted to grab the guy and throw him back into his seat, but didn't want to start a fight here.

Trey lowered his voice conspiratorially. "I'll bet Tommy-boy brought you here just to watch, eh? Too good and righteous to compete? But you look like you'd like to hit the mats. There's still time to sign up for tomorrow's events . . ."

Sensei stepped back to stand next to me, and he put his arm around my shoulders. "Leave her alone, Trey. You know we won't agree on this."

Trey narrowed his eyes and crossed his arms over his chest again. "Yeah, go ahead and protect your little karateka. I'm sure you wouldn't want her to get . . . hurt or anything."

Sensei's fingers gripped my arm tightly. "Nice to see you again, Trey. Good luck at the tournament," he said, twisting his lips around the polite words then steering me firmly towards a table as far from Trey and his friends as possible.

Jack sat across from me, and I could see him warily eyeing Trey's table from time to time. Everyone seemed subdued and uncomfortable from the encounter.

"Who is that guy?" I asked.

Sensei sighed. "Remember the brown belt I told you about? The one who left because I wouldn't promote him fast enough?"

"The one with the crappy cat stance?"

"Yes. That's Trey." He glanced sideways at me with a worried look on his face.

"What's the matter?" I laughed a little, trying to lighten things up. "Don't worry, he didn't convince me to enter the tournament."

Nobody else laughed. I looked around, and all three of them looked very serious. Sensei put his hand over mine. "Audra, I have a bad feeling about Trey. He left our dojo on very unpleasant terms, and I wouldn't put it past him to try something this weekend." Jack and Lisa nodded their heads in agreement. "I don't like the way he looked at you. Promise me that you'll stay with us at all times, okay?"

I looked at Jack. The worry lines between his brows deepened, and he said, "Sensei's right. Trey was never very stable, and he always feels like he has to prove something."

"Okay," I said, a little baffled at all this concern. "Don't worry about me, I'll stick to you guys like glue!"

Marcus bustled up with a tray of drinks and a funny story about some couple he saw in a booth, but I just sat there, suddenly not hungry anymore.

* * * * * * * * *

To be continued. Coming next: "Ch. 03, Confrontation."

ynona
ynona
48 Followers
Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Oooo

Loving it already - I want more chapters :)

tata12772tata12772over 16 years ago
Great

I love it so far..please continue...you have my attention fully

grizxgrizxover 16 years ago
A great beginning

I loved the start of this story. It has the right balance of tension, fear and complication to keep my intrest. I'm looking forward to more.

Share this Story

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Similar Stories

An Unlikely Match Nerdy British researcher meets American college student.in Romance
A Clichéd Love Story Two stubborn people find love.in Romance
The Cotillion A modern twist on an old fairy tale.in Romance
I'm Not Who I Used to Be It's never too late to make amends.in Romance
Only Yours Your soulmate could be your best friend.in Romance
More Stories