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Click hereI want you to reach for me, warm and naked, facing away from you while I'm sleeping peacefully in the middle of the night.
I want to feel your hand on my flesh, the gentle pressure of your palm and fingers running across my waist and up toward my breast, the sensation of you massaging and teasing my nipple, starting to rouse me from my slumber. "Mmmmmm...," I'll moan, encouraging more of the same, only harder.
You'll lean into me now, curling your arm around me and pulling yourself up against me to spoon me. "Ahhhh..." I'll feel your body, so warm and close to me, and I'll settle into you, too. I'll bring my own hand to you so I can rub your hip and thigh, then down to cup your balls and move them around in my hand slowly.
I can feel you hard already, pressed against my ass, and give a little wiggle to let you slide in between my thighs. I tense now, feeling your warm breath close to my neck and ear, turning me on like only you know how.
"I love you," you whisper to me, making me shiver as I feel my hair move with you nuzzling my ear. Goosebumps appear over me, exciting my nipples to attention, and my breasts swell.
I turn myself toward you now, and we kiss passionately. I wrap my leg around you pulling you closer to me while my hand runs trough your hair then down your neck massaging there.
You'll pull me closer, snaking your arm around my waist as you kiss me again. I run my hand from your neck to your back, kneading your muscles as I go, on my way downward.
You stop me, grabbing my hand with your left and bringing it over my head. My breath catches in my throat as you switch to hold it with your other hand now. My side is open and vulnerable to you, and you take advantage of that.
I feel you trace the contours of my side, starting my wrist, traveling the length of my arm. You curve around to my breast, and pause to tweak and pinch my nipple before continuing on.
Across my side and down toward my hip, you caress your way along me. My back arches, bringing my pussy even closer to you. You keep me away from your cock by pushing my leg off you and pinning me on the bed, my legs parted for you. You know I am wet for you, and bring your hand from my hip across my side toward my pussy.
I jerk as you cross over a sensitive spot at my pelvic bone, and you run your hand up and over it again. You chuckle as you get the same reaction from me. You repeat it one more time, knowing I love it. My hand pulls against the restraint of yours as you continue to tease me.
"Please," I beg you, "now." You know I need you to touch my clit, and of course, I know it will not be this soon. You cup my mound and squeeze lightly as I shudder. My leg shifts under yours and you press onto it a little harder, keeping me in place where you want me to be. Your fingers trace along my pussy lips. Up and down, then in circles, your fingers keep teasing.
My nipples are going to explode, I think. You feel them graze against your chest as I thrash around. Your mouth searches for my hard tip, capturing it easily. I still now, tensing as I suck in a deep breath, arching my back more for you. I let out a loud, "Ohhhhhhh...Yes! ...don't stop!" as you continue to suck my nipples and rub my pussy. I feel your finger slip inside to find my clit as you kiss me again. Your tongue circles mine as your finger traces the same pattern on my clit.
It's too much for me now as I struggle to get my hand at your cock and bring you some of the pleasure you are giving me, but you won't let me move. I realize that even though you are not hurting me, I cannot move.
"UUHHHH! Let me!..." I call out to you, only to be met with a soft "No, not yet," whispered into my ear. This brings another shiver from me, and I growl as you push your finger inside me. My hips move in time with you, stroking in and out of my pussy, returning to find my clit again.
I wince as I hear the sounds of the slickness between my legs, and you laugh. "Not funny," I say through my gritted teeth, teetering on the brink of a fabulous orgasm that you will not let me have.
"Say it," you whisper to me. I stiffen, knowing what you want me to say, knowing I can't. "Hmmmmmmmmmmm..." I draw out, stalling for time as you tease me, two fingers easily slipping inside now. "Uhhhhhhhhhh, yeah! Mmmm!" I chant, lost in the moment. Tremors start slowly building, deep inside me.
"Say it," you repeat to me, more forcefully now, as your two fingers move in and out of me, and your thumb jabs at my clit. I can feel your cock, hard and pulsing against my leg. You know this is close to pushing me over the edge, as I start to shake. You stop all movement abruptly, still pinning me in place. I wriggle as I cry out in alarm, "NO! Don't stop, don't stop! Keep going! I'm SO close!"
"Say it and I'll keep going," you tell me. I have to say it, I know I do or you won't resume your playing and I'll be stuck here in limbo. I can't move, so I can't get to my pussy myself. "Ahhhhh!" I scream as you lick my nipples then start to blow on them. "FUCK ME NOW!" I scream at you.
You laugh out loud, releasing the leg and arm you've held for so long, rolling off my pinned left side limbs while telling me, "That's all I needed to hear from you." With this I grab at you pulling you on top of me.
You position yourself at my entrance as I dig my fingers into your shoulders and back, wrapping my legs around your waist and clinging to you. My pussy is sopping wet now, and you thrust inside me in one deep, full motion as I scream out in pleasure, my legs clamping onto your waist.
You are achingly still inside me. Your head bends down to bite at my nipples as I buck against you, wanting you to move, not just linger there.
You tease me by pulling out slowly, getting me to cry out again. "No, harder, now, please!" I yell at you, and finally get you to do what I want. You force your cock into me, hard and fast, going as deep as you can, filling me just like I want. "Ahhhhh! Yes!!! That's what I want!! More!" I yell, my voice straining as I start to convulse, my pussy contracting and squeezing your cock. "Oh, God, now, Now!" I scream as I come.
"Ahhhhh!" you call out as you pound into me a few more strokes, and reward me with your own, spurting inside me as I grip you with my legs and arms, my whole body pressed tightly against you.
"Is that what you wanted?" you ask slyly, whispering again in my ear, holding me tightly. "God, yes!" I reply, shivering again. "How did you know?"
"Well, I might have read something you left for me," you say, referring to the story I wrote for you the other night. "It was minimized on your screen, and I saw it when I had to check something in your computer."
Flushing a deep crimson I tell him softly, "I didn't know you saw that."
"You can write to me anytime," was all he said before kissing me again.
Your descriptions and the loving passion the couple possesses made the story extremely hot.
Please read my feedback. I don't want to give anything away to future readers. They'll just need to discover it for themselves. Very well written with excellent word sellection... and very HOT!
Inspiring and real, I could imagine it all happening. Very erotic. Nice pace. You're not writing anymore?
Oohhh, you can write letters and post them here anytime! Wow. This was so easy to visualize as you used words so well and what an intense build of action. "growled", "wince", "jabs" "pulsing" so many words used so well! That "poor" narrator wasn't the only one screaming. I am impressed how as a male I can still appreciate what the female narrator is going through as your descriptions are so well done. Once again wonderful writing.
... it breaks so many of my preferences, but still worked for me.
First, I hate the 'You' convention, but simply the title broke down that barrier: it's a letter to her husband, so of course the pronoun she uses is, "You."
Next, the story doesn't just change tenses, but the whole point of view changes: the narration starts as if it IS a letter, describing wishes to her beloved, but by the end it is a graphic description of something happening right NOW!
Breaking both rules ought to mean it's badly written, but you've heard the one that says, "rules are for the guidance of the wise and the obedience of fools" haven't you?
Being able to break rules and still write an enchanting, and very sexy story, shows real talent.
Can't write more, I'm off to read her others...
I've read two stories from Erotic Couplings. They're both yours, and both remind of what counts. I'm playing Celine Dion as I read and now I'm sitting here floating around in romance wonderland.
I loved the story. Incredible build up. Had me wanting more. Very sweet, very passionate
I found the link to your stories in the AH. This was a very hot, very erotic tale. Nicely done. Off to read your other work.
Excellent on all counts: sensual descriptions, realistic inner thoughts of the characters, marvelous development from thought to action. Thank you for the enjoyable read!
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Any words I add her will seem so inadequate in comparison to the ones I just read. After finishing this story I immediately got up from the computer, went to the next room and kissed my wife. You truly captured a moment that was so familiar and breathed new life into it with your loving touch; like stumbling across that old photo that stirs up the images of a precious moment from the past. Nice, kim.
I think its great that this started as the inner "I want" and as it progressed it became more and more outward action. Superb.
...what a man's gotta do....smiles... nice erotic walk through of an encounter, both physical and mental. Love the way he toyed with her, well done!
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