All Comments on 'A Lifetime in One Moment'

Ive rarely ever found stories like yours,my names also kevin and im currently a virgin,if my first time is anything like this id die a happy man.this was so incredibly delicate and just an all around beautiful read,thank you for sharing this ,its brightened my thoughts a bit,theres love everywhere around us in the small things and the things we normally take for granted.thank you for this piece.

I have read this story more than a few times. It's probably my favorite. Well thought out, well told and making me wish there was more. Again, VERY well done.

I read this before I fell asleep last night and felt compelled to read it again when I got up this morning. Never have I felt so touched about a story before. I could feel every emotion they were experiencing, it was so real to me. This is by far my favorite story. Thank you for writing it

But this one was especially special. THANK YOU Author

My eyes welled up as well, my best complement.

I dont thing I've ever read anything that held my interested for so long. I hope to someday be able to captivate an audience in the same way

Wonderful pacing and language. Extremely emotionally authentic. Good job!

Thank you!!

That's all I can say really ... Thank you

Exquisite, I don't don't know if you are male or female....if you are that passionate and articulate in your normal life, you are something else!

Thanks for sharing! Such a wonderful story about first time and first love! You are truly blessed to have found someone like Laura!

Fantastic. A wonderful love story. A good example that age is really not important if you're truly in love. And all of the sex was presented in such a tender loving and delicious way. Thank you very very much!

Time reading. This has to be in the top ten on this site, EVERY young man should experience a strong, sophisticated and talented pretty woman.

Embrace the now, make memories for a happy future.

You have elevated the form.

There are many fine writes here.

None more elegant.

And I see several readers responded the same way. Two wonderful sincere caring people who were there for each other... for a few fleeting moments that will last forever.

This was a real sweet story that made me cry a little at the end. So bittersweet.

A very lovely story. . .

"I looked down at her, and for a moment I had an out-of-body experience. I could imagine it, I thought. I could see me making love to Laura thousands of times over, making love to the eighteen-year-old Laura I saw in the picture, to a thirty-year-old Laura, to the Laura in bed with me tonight, to an older and even more elegant Laura – to all of them, to all of her, all at the same time."

Awesome.

Wonderful story CC, and beautifully written - thank you so much

Steve

That was a very beautiful story. Thank you

Spectacular and I do mean spectacle abounds. You paint a vivid scene, not just the portraits. And yes the sex was sizzling, but the patter of the hearts herein make it smoke.

Now being a grandpa, and having a beautiful wife of over 48 years, I would like to say this is one of the best erotica stories that my wife and I have read ever. Sad but beautiful. I want to thank you for sharing this with us on a quiet Sunday afternoon.

I try to write stories like this myself - but not as well as this. I don't think that it's really a sad story - so much achieved by and for both of them. Why would anticipation of an inevitable ending make it sad? Better this way than the usual 'happy ever after' conclusion. Congratulations!

Wow that was beautiful. I treasure stories that touch my heart. Wish I had your talent.

My goodness. What an absolutely beautiful love story. You are such an incredibly good writer. The emotions that your stories generate are worthy of the very finest authors. I’m wrung out. I can’t tell you how many times my eyes watered or how many times I flat out cried at the poignant love expressed by these two. The characters seemed real and as a man, I will never forget the feeling of loss when they said their final goodby. The ending was perfect. A brief moment in time that would rest in your memory forever.

5-😊😊😊😊😊 and 5-🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲 for the tears I shed reading this most beautiful of love stories

Thank you ❤️

Stubbyone