A Rainy Evening In

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We have some quiet fun on a rainy evening in.
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We have some quiet fun on a rainy evening in.



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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Weird

Lol, that was horrible!It started off ok then you just made really weird sounds for like 5 minutes.

KnightAuraKnightAuraabout 7 years ago

Absolutely fantastic. The subtle sounds were detailed enough to where you can almost feel it. Amazing job marlama :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
lmao ))

im so high i don't remember how i got here ))

Dark_StormDark_Stormalmost 9 years ago
You took me there,

That's the best complement I can give an audio, the fact that I could actually "feel" myself being in that room with you on that rainy night.

Good job on the background rain/storm sound effects on this one. They were loud enough to set the mood and place, but didn't interfere with hearing your voice or the sensual sounds.

My only minor criticism would be perhaps a bit more description of what you were doing in the second half of it would have helped. While I could identify and "feel" what was happening based on the sounds for the most part, some sounds made me pause to wonder what they represented to be happening. A bit of description might have helped in those cases.

Overall, very well done, with the minor caveat that a wee bit more description would have taken it from "very good" to "perfect".

I'm still going to give it 5 stars since it managed to make me feel like I was actually there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Excitement

very well captured, voice was very impressive, story real...exciting

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