A Very Shameful Punishment Ch. 09

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And when he looked round, he saw a man whose handsome features he recognized. And in an instant, he knew who the man was—he was the man with whom Eleanor had consorted to her detriment: Gail's non-husband, Graham.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Completely Ridiculous - Misandry at it worst

This is definitely in the top 5 of the most ridiculous stories I’ve had the misfortune to encounter. I didn’t read all of this chapter, I scanned through this and another chapter after having read chapter 1.

The concept is poorly thought out as well as being deeply sickening. I fail to see any logic that presents misandrist rhetoric and genital mutilation as being erotic, because it’s not. Seriously though...” superior woman”, news flash; women are not superior to men, likewise men are not superior to women. Given that you’re on a forum for adults I’d have thought you would have worked that out. Then there’s Eleanor beating her husband for shits and giggles, uh nope still not erotic. Although theoretically they could be in a BDSM dynamic but I’m not going to dredge through anymore of this story to find out. Why would a semi public caning of the judges match the level of pain, suffering and injustice that she suffered? Why not demand that they serve the same punishment that she did?

A ridiculous, non erotic horror story. Obviously we don’t share similar kinks, that’s just fine by me.

Best of luck with your writing.

Tess (UK)

SexySandra01SexySandra01over 5 years ago
Great Story

It’s a riveting story and what a twist in the story in this episode .. can’t wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The Women's Republic, I Like It!

Hallo Leslie!

A well written brilliant story, yes Love, another 5-Star winner!

The Women's Republic, what a wonderful country,,, well of course for myself, that depends on their views about gays, and lesbian sex!.... However it does, kinda remind me of my idea of what a modern day Amazon Warrior Women's society, may have evolved into!.... You think, may-by?

Your kinky dyke friend, Gay Kat.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
fantastic understanding

You have a deep appreciation of both masculine and feminine nature. I loved every bit of this story, from its recognition that in their own way, women can be just as severe on men as the other way round, and in the inspired use of fantasy that you succeed in making. The intense degree of sadomasochism is something of a turnoff at times but I have to confess that it excited me to a high, wet degree.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Again?

This is so over the top. Try and explain why any man would stay in the Republic? Try and explain how the women maintain such control over the men. Too much testosterone in men to accept being second class citizens and subjects to the whims of bitches like Ellie. The body count would be enormous. And since no one seems to have children, the population would be dwindling and who would be taking care of the basics? Water, power and food production require labor. Getting worse.....

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