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Click hereMy orgasm, when it came, shook me to my core. I remember my body stiffening, gritting my teeth, even to the point of chipping a tooth and it felt like my entire insides were spurting out flooding the very back of Tanya's vagina.
I could barely breathe afterward. Tanya's legs fell down to the floor and I lay on top of her, cheek to cheek with her beautiful face. My cock had softened inside Tanya and I rolled over off of her, laying on my back still trying to recover from the fuck of the century.
Tanya was breathing hard as well, but after a few minutes managed to say, "Wow, I think Addie and I need to go out again sometime." Then she rolled over and we began kissing.
At some point, we managed to find ourselves in bed. I don't know if we'd gone to sleep on the floor or crawled in bed before sleeping, but we were in bed when I woke up in the middle of the night. I thought about my wife in the adjacent room with Tanner. As incredible as our fucking had been, what had Tanner and Addie's been like? Had I really wanted my wife to fuck that stranger last night? Judging from my reaction with Tanya, the answer to that one was pretty obvious. Then the big question; if Tanner and I hadn't found them when we did, would she have?
I looked over at my companion in the bed, my lover. It was dark, but there was enough light coming in from outside to see that beautiful, angelic face. I thought about the movie '10' with Bo Derek and Dudley Moore and vowed to find it and watch it again to see if my recollection of Bo Derek was accurate; was Bo Derek really as beautiful as the woman next to me? I rolled back over, closed my eyes and tried to go back to sleep. Tomorrow would be another day, a trip to the old silver mining town of Virginia City. Was there any way another day could match the day before?
- COMMENTS
Stubbyone10 months ago2nd time reading, and it didn’t get any better, nor did my opinion change. As soon as I saw them playing with the two strangers in the dance club I would have returned to the hotel, packed , and left. Your characters, both Addie and Tanya have changed into sluts with no rules. I know its a story, but why make all of the chyunlikeable ? Not people you would care associating with. Sex is one thing. Uncontrollable urges are quite another. Neither woman showed the least amount if respect fir her husband or her lover. You are a great writer but these last few chapters were not fun or sexy. What’s the point in writing in Lw if neither of those characteristics sre present ?
A generous 2-for editing. 2-😣. No smiles, not even a grin. I really disliked this chapter ! Boo !
jsch1947about 4 years agoAnd I'm not one of the husband's.
But if I was, that taking off and leaving hubbies to try to find them would have earned her more anger than she had with the Daryl introduction.
You want to run and hide, if we don't find you in 30 minutes, we're going to a cat house. Find your own way home. Make sure you get an STD test on the way..
You're worried about alcohol with the baby, what about chlimidia, or clap? Both of those women have too much to lose to pull that shit.
tkh3nkey2110about 4 years agokeeps you guessing. She keeps you off balance not letting you know from one minute to the next who she is going to be. A very hot advancement to a great story. *****
Stubbyonealmost 6 years agoYour scores are going lower with every chapter. Who are you and what have you done with the original author? The characters have all morphed into lust filled crazies. The "girls night out" scene is so totally over the top and so out of character for both women. You honestly think the two husbands would have reacted the way they did in your story? Not in any scenario that I could have ever remotely imagined.
It just would never have happened. Not sexy! Not fun! Not realistic. Why ???
CaOldDogalmost 6 years agoMatt already lost his marriage and his children (including Tanners kids) will never respect him. This story is over the top crap with a wimp husband lost in space (between his ears). 1* is generous
