Alex & Alexa Ch. 13

"If all you have to say is that you're tired of hearing the two of them mope about not knowing what to do, then kwitcherbitchin. If you were in their situation, your solution would have ended in heartbreak and disaster ages ago."

YES! Very well said.

I have mixed feelings about getting near the end of this story, but at least I know there are more stories tangential to this one. And since I consider Better Call Saul to be even better than Breaking Bad, it's possible that I'll like your prequels and spinoffs even better than A & A.

Another, great chapter. I still believe Alexa is being totally insensitive to the love of her life, Alex.

When will she grow up and devote herself to her man who she professes to love but still screws around on at will??

Reading this, Alex comes across as naive boofhead. An idiot, way too trusting with his heart.

Too blinded by lust to see the truth of his one sided relationship with his Aunt.

I know which way this jolly yarn will go,to a happy place, but in someone else's hands Alex could of been tragically hurt by two selfish bitches.

Good story BTW.

I am completely confused and bewildered as to why a relationship of incest would be more damaging than two senior professors playing around with students of theirs. I am pretty sure some colleges have very harsh rules against that sort of thing. I am also very sure everything will come out great in the wash as far as Alex and Alexa is concerned. GREAT STORY BE AN OBVIOUS GREAT WRITER!!!!

I not only didn't see it coming, but it went right on by me and I'm not sure I've caught up yet!

(nitpick- gym mat sex scene Alexa says 'orgy with four gorgeous girls', there were only three)

Back to the cosmic level WTF!?

The black hole of suttiness comment made my eyes hurt...

They made a bet!?

Dad went Dom on 'too drunk to do this Jeanie' and, drunk or not, she hopped to... quite telling!

oops, you done dropped one too many overt hints here:

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...How you two figured it out is beyond me. Even Alexa hadn't been expecting it."

"You just develop a sense for people when you get older, Alex," dad said, filling mom's cup again. "You'll develop that intuition soon enough."

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At first I thought it was just the dad that had figured it out (and done so a while ago). But between the above and the fact that she won the bet, I believe that they both not only know, but that they approve. Now, how do they help these two out, as I assume they are going to?

Even if I'm completely right about my conclusions, the number of questions remaining are wide open... and you still have many zingers to come, of that I'm quite sure!

Ya know, when this story started I thought it was a bit cheesy and I know I bitched about the grammar (content vs character proficiency) but I'll be darned if this hasn't crept into my heart... favoriting your story may not mean much to you, but it's a big deal to me, and I want you to know I'm very happy you've shared this tale.

Jason

Hot, sexy, erotic, sad, happy and above all very, very funny.

All in all just about the perfect story !

Thank-you so much for sharing it with us !

Rapier

Does monogamy exist in this series?

You've made it abundantly clear that Karen, and in is own way Prof. Hulk, are very intuitive characters. For them to not know about Alex and Alexa . . . I can see you pulling the, 'we've known for awhile' bit when/if they do confess.

Either way, enjoying the story.

I love the story this far, some discrepancies in descriptions here and there. I am sure the confusion of Alex and Alexa being twisted here and there is quite by accident. I am sure I do not have the imagination that you have shown and will certainly look forward to the remaining chapters! Keep it up, like a flower!9D8C

But the calculation in the review below assumes there was only one recording happening at any incident. I mean, they had four cellphones recording during the orgy in the equipment room. The girls seemed to have a fetish for recording for posterity.

Sure, that's still a ridiculous amount of recording, but my point is, best not to underestimate Alexa and Freja. Given their determination, there's no way to be even close to accurate. I guess we just take her word for it.

- Cori

the following is picked up from the first page:

Alexa blushed. "I... this is going to sound super-slutty, Alex, but eight hours in one night probably couldn't get us through a hundredth of the videos. We were busy and naughty girls growing up."

so i did the maths - and to achieve the 'feat' above, she would have to fuck 24/7 for approximately 9 to 11 and a half years. no breaks for anything. and this is just fucking on camera. I extrapolated and worked out that to live a 'normal' life and continue fucking that much, she would have needed to start fucking when she was -30 years old. yep negative 30.

but dont worry, it doesnt take anything away from the story.

once again sorry for being so nit-picky

great story btw! hope you release the next chapter(s) soon

Love the story. I wouldn't listen to ppl who complain about there being no drama or them getting caught or someone finding out or something. Don't have to have that stuff to make a good story, sometimes it even ruins the story. I'd just keep doing what your doing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Sure, you address in the Author's Note, but the fact that either a) Alex and Alexa haven't been caught (definitively or by a verbal slip up somewhere) or b) They haven't come forward to admit what it is going on is ridiculous to me.

What has it been, a month now? More? A parent would see recognize a look on their child's face, a twinkle in their eye. It'd be like a lightning bolt and suddenly the mom would know - damn, Alex is in love with Alexa. And then she would look further into it and realize there's more going on than just Alex's feelings.

I'm sorry. I just can't buy that they haven't been discovered. And the fact that you, the author, think that'd it would be this easy to hide probably means you haven't tried to hide a relationship like this under such close scrutiny as this story (they all live under one roof).

Please end this right. With a little drama.

Not that I disagree with your point, of course. (I just try to remember "it's fiction. Statistics don't matter in fiction." and enjoy the story)

It's just that I doubt your comment about Alexa's sexual history will be permitted to stand without some form of condemnation and/or shaming and/or two-minute-hate being hurled at you. I'd bet money on some of the abuse including suggestions that you are insecure, childish, intolerant, bigoted, afraid of strong women with healthy sex drives, etc. I have a "right think bingo card" I anticipate filling out. Or the horse could sing, you never know. But I wouldn't bet on it. Best of luck to you!

That aside, I expect Alex's parents will figure it out before they tell them. They're smart people, and Alex and Alexa can't avoid making a mistake forever. Heck, they might not even realize they *made* a mistake, considering how quickly Mike and Karen predicted Jeanie and Freja. I really hope Alex and Alexa have a happy ending!

I feel so sorry for Alex and Alexa and wonder how you will end the story.

I wonder if there really are 2 women that can fuck that much. Some of Alexa's sexual adventures like the 2 cocks in her pussy and the peeing on each other's pussies are a little much. It makes the beautiful Alexa a TRUE SLUT of the HIGHEST MAGNITUDE. I would think her pussy and asshole would be so stretched and out of shape that no dick would fill and satisfy her honeypot.

She is an amazing person, smart and beautiful. However, if I were dating her I might have times when her promiscuous and slutty history might be a little much. What if you are walking down the street and you run into guys that have fucked her, how would you handle the comments. Women would be jealous of her and make unkind remarks.

Talk about the WORLD'S BEST FOUR WAY ORGY....Jeanie, Alexa, and Freja with Alex getting the benefit. OMG..WOW.

I have really enjoyed the series and will be sad when it is over. I hope you find a way to end the story and keep everyone employed. Alexa and Alex deserve a happy, sexy, and love filled ending.