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Click here"Holy shit! We have to do that again!!" Alex exclaimed. We both laughed for a couple of minutes before getting dressed and heading back to the party. We walked in and the first person we saw was our Mother and a few of her friends.
"There you two are! Where have you been?" probed our Mom.
"We just went for a walk. Brit wanted my advice on her future." Alex explained. I could feel my face turning red because I knew what he meant by my "future". Walking away from the group of older women we heard them saying how lucky our mother was to have kids that get along that well. If they only knew...
I have since moved to Miami and started school. Alex was offered a job in South Beach and now lives 20 minutes from my school. I'm not sure how we're going to continue our relationship; I don't need all the details right now. Alex and I see each other almost daily and spend every weekend at his house. We have christened every room in the house several times. My dorm has even gotten to see some action. I'm anxious to see what the future brings for me and my dear brother. One thing's for certain, it will be hot!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoAs far as i'm concerned, your brother would have had at least half a dozen opportunities to (briefly) visit home on leave during a six year service overseas.
i hate to be such a stickler for things such as this... but personally speaking, that minor, little failure in detail is what sort of "took me out" of it almost immediately. i always immensely appreciate when attention is given to the real-world plausibility of, at least, the mere backbone to a story's setup/premise. In regards to your story, obviously the significant, primary factor in which the subsequent events follow is based around the fact that they haven't seen each other in so many years. perhaps i'm a rare bird when analyzing stories such as these, but i would absolutely love to see an ever-so-slight tweak on the very beginning, so that the developing chemistry and desire/lust between them comes off as much stronger and believable — towards what i imagine would be legitimately felt or experienced in the scenario played out in real life.
Cheers!
OedipusErectusalmost 6 years agoWow, what a fun and sexy time you had with your brother! But I'm curious: Are you still with him these six years later? How about an update.
clearedtofuckabout 8 years agoThe last paragraph was a little abrupt. I was yearning for more. Maybe another chapter?
Anonymousover 10 years agoLoved hearing the story from the female perspective. Surprised that you were willing to recant something so personal and taboo. Thank you for sharing, excellent story!
