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I opened the cover, and sure enough, there was a note in her handwriting: "To Joseph, with all my love, thank you for being there when I needed you, and please tell Craig thanks for help with the calc as well! Melissa, August 21, 1989 (You win -- please come to Boston at Thanksgiving!)
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Scoratabout 1 year agoOK I love reading this author, if for no other reason than I loved 18th Street Intimacy. And this story is a lot like that one - feelings at the end of a relationship. I understand this site is nothing but fantasy but stories like this - the melancholy last moments of something you don't want to end - make it so much better than average. And the raging mother was a perfect ending, so neither of them had to take the blame. Didn't see that coming!
Anonymousabout 2 years agoUgh, that was terrible. He broke her heart and was a complete ass... I wish I knew what happened to her.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoIt was interesting, reading the comments about this story, to see that I was not the only one who didn’t really care much for it.
redzingeralmost 9 years agoIt feels a little sad and unfinished. I know that real life is more like that - there can't always be a happy ending - and I admire you for attempting a brave ending. But it feels like he just deserted her, which makes the hero seem a little weak, not a winner.
Good luck.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agothat was sooo sad.
He should hate his mother.
I've been married 40 years and we married at 18, engaged for a year or so before that time.
I am tired of people thinking 18 is to young, its just many are immature till they hit their 30's, a lot of are normal and quite functional relationship wise at 18.
Needs a chapter on tracking her down.
happytechguyalmost 9 years agoWhat an incredibly sad story! Just my preference, but I was not looking for something so sad when reading "romance". Should have been a different category or a sad ending warning up front. These two were so young, and easy to have made a mistake. She could have whispered "love you" instead of "read it at school" and he could have at least looked at it before hiding the book in the closet. To think of what she has been thinking for those 8 years, and does he realize how big a loser he is for not reading it? Why should she have written to him again? She wrote in the biik, he should have read it and contacted her about the invitation to visit. Anyway, I hope this may just be part one, with part two having them find love with each other or some type of happy ending. (I chose to read this because I liked your Somewhere Beyond the Lighthouse).
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoPoor writing, stilted dialogue, not really finished either, he's still a loser all those years later.
