All Comments on 'Award'

A bit of fantasy thrown in for good measure... thank you.

This story was just okay in my view. The main problem I have is in the character development. The characters in these stories are one dimensional. They are either perfect in every way, great football player, humble, giving of oneself and always doing the right thing. Contrast that with the bad characters who are uniformly bad, They are bullies, selfish, and cheaters. This lack of dimension detracts from the story. Also, the ending was a little over the top.

Great story and very believable up until he won 4 super bowls with the cowboys

I would have thought having the sun shining out of his arse would cause the protagonist constant discomfort but presumably he was too stoic and humble to mention it.

Good story. Easy read. Well written.

If you read the story remember it’s a story!!! Meant to entertain us. Don’t judge it too hardly. Go Giants

Well done. Easy read.

Bill S.

7 years since the author last posted. It pays to search the archives. The story is a masterpiece.

The Hoary Cleric

It would be nice to have an ending a little less over-the top.

Great piece!

Too bad the author seems to have stopped posting stories like this here.

Good story.