All Comments on 'Becoming His Girl Ch. 03'

I prefer better endings.

I very much enjoyed the first two chapters, and the beginning of the third, but the former GF with a strap on lost me completely.

I didn’t like the last chapter it got to me that he was only using him and I thought something was special between them was gonna happen I hate the ex gf and to find out jim only wanted him I would like a better ending it felt rushed:(

I didn't like the final chapter at all

This definetly needs a chapter 4 in the form of an epilogue. As of rn, without a proper ending, its a 1/5. The ending is way too depressing.

I love this entire story except that Wendy does not get to be a permeant part of Jim's and Elise life. Every girl I knew as a youth knew what I was and let me masturbate as they fucked my friends. I paid for everything but I felt good as my little penis pulsated and to see them joined and cumming was sweet.

Well the sucks.

Now I wish, I never read this. Wendy is a cheating whore and she gets her new man to fuck her ex over & for what? Billy didn't even do anything to her besides not fuck her the way she wanted which he wouldn't know if she don't say anything. I want revenge. I want Billy to get his revenge on them both. Make Jim regret not choosing him. Ugh, what a way to ruin my night.

did not like this ending at all

Great series story, but is there going a 4 part or a follow up off the live of Billy what happened to him if you can continue to be sissy slut for older man or become a sissy hooker

Getting roaring drunk Jim brags about how on a bet he could sissify a boy, separate him from his girlfriend and turn her into his slut after destroying the boy's life... She goes back to Billy...

This story totally and royalty sucked, please do us a favor and don’t write anything else….l

Dissatisfied with 3 part lost my hard cock

Yeah, chapter 3 was disappointing, to say the least. This one badly needs a re-write.