Becoming His Slut

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I'm captured and forced into servitude after a date with Him.
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*Thank you to SlaveGirl 70 for helping to edit this, I appreciate your work and the suggestions you made*

I felt woozy and my head was heavy. I blinked, my eyes darting around the unfamiliar room, when suddenly I realised I was unable to move. My hands were raised above me and tied to the ceiling whilst my ankles were shackled to the floor, keeping me upright.

I groaned in dismay as I became fully aware my clothes were gone and the coolness of the room had caused my nipples to erect and stand proudly to attention.

Escape from these bindings was futile but I tried anyway, twisting and yanking at the rope fastening my hands together, but it was no use; I was trapped. I looked around the room again, hoping to spot a way out and trying to find some indication of where I was. A small light in the corner dimly lit the shadows around me and it seemed like someone's basement. I stilled as I heard footsteps approaching and a larger, brighter light lit the room. My eyes widened at the sight in front of me as the items sharing the room with me became illuminated. These items looked like medieval torture devices and included racks and cages as well as whips, floggers and canes lining the walls. In the far corner, one of these cages contained another girl who was also naked.

A key turned in the lock and a figure stepped through. I gasped as I realised this was the man I'd been on a date with the other night but now, as he entered the room, he paid no attention to me, not even glancing in my direction.

"Hey!" I cried. "Why are you doing this? Why are you keeping me here? Let me go!"

He turned to face me then, his eyes coolly examining my nude body and suddenly I felt very vulnerable and exposed.

"I see you're awake now. Good," he responded. "I brought you here to be mine. You'll make the perfect slave with a bit of training which will start today. Now. You're to do exactly what I say when I say it and without hesitation. Otherwise there will be...consequences."

"Consequences?" I choked, my head spinning with this information.

"I thought a demonstration would be better than any explanation I can give. Luckily one of my other slaves is in need of some punishment today."

He turned away from me, headed towards the girl in the cage and opened the cage door.

"Exit the cage and assume the standard position," he quietly commanded the girl.

Immediately she did as instructed and kneeled in front of him, legs apart, with hands clasped behind her back with her head facing the floor.

"This is the standard position," he explained turning to face me again. "You'll be expected to assume this position whenever I enter the room if I have not instructed you otherwise."

"Now, slut," he said addressing the girl. "Do you know why you're here today?"

The girl nodded.

"Speak!" he barked.

"Yes, sir."

"Very good and why is it that you're here?"

"Because I disobeyed your rules and must be punished, sir"

"That's right, and what sort of master would I be if I didn't punish a slave who required it?" he asked rhetorically.

He marched away from the girl and dragged a small table across the room, positioning it directly in front of me.

"Slut. Come here, bend over this table and keep your hands behind your back."

The girl hurried across the room and did as instructed. I had a front row seat now and despite the situation, the girl's eyes lit up with excitement.She was enjoying this,I thought with horror.

Meanwhile, the man, I'd previously known as Adam (but who could say if that was his real name), had chosen one of the many canes that lined the walls and was walking back over to us.

"Since this is the first time I've had to punish you I won't be as harsh. Ten strikes, you'll count them for me and at no point are you to remove your hands from your back."

What came next happened swiftly. He lifted the cane and struck her ass ten times as she counted, moaning somewhere between pleasure and pain.

The girl was instructed to go back up stairs and clean herself up whilst Adam turned his attention back to me. He started to undress, slowly stripping away his shirt and trousers, until he was as naked as I was.

"Open your mouth."

I was in no position to argue with his instructions but in my moment of hesitation he yanked back my hair as I cried out and roughly forced his now-erect dick into my open mouth. As he savagely face-fucked me I felt so very violated but he continued, ignoring the tears now forming in my eyes from his brutal assault. His face-fucking quickened and I could tell he was close to coming but nothing prepared me for the torrent of cum that hit the back of my throat. It was warm and salty and he left me with no choice but to swallow as his dick was still invading my mouth.

"Swallowing without me having to ask? You will make a good slave. Now that I've tested your oral skills I think it's safe to say that you did more than satisfactorily. Good slaves get rewards," he panted.

Before I could imagine what horrors these rewards would entail I felt the ropes on my hands being pulled, forcing me to stand on tiptoes as my body was stretched upwards, and I now realised the shackles on my ankles had been removed. I tried to kick out at Adam but he caught my legs, chuckling at me.

"Now, now, if you're going to be like that I won't give you any rewards and you'll get what I gave the last slut."

I stopped struggling at that, I didn't want to be caned like the other girl. My ankles were shoved apart and attached to a spreader bar, keeping me completely exposed.

Adam ran his hands along my naked body, caressing the nape of my neck and my shoulders until his hands found their way to my breasts. He gently started to pinch my erect nipples between his thumb and forefinger and without thinking I moaned appreciatively. I could feel myself getting wet at his touch and tried to jerk away but despite my protests he continued, my body to betraying me even further by letting another moan escape.

"You like that? I knew you would. Do you want more, my little slut-in-training?"

I whimpered in anticipation of what more could be and his hands slowly crept down my stomach to my pussy but before he reached it he took his hands away and moved in front of me.

"I'm going to untie you now and you're going to get on all fours while I fuck you from behind."

I felt the rope loosening around my wrists and suddenly I was free from my chains. I stood motionless for a moment, briefly considering running but I knew it would be hopeless – the spreader bar was still attached. Adam could overpower me and realistically I wouldn't get far, then I'd have to deal with consequences if I disobeyed him, he'd already made that very clear. I obliged and did as he'd instructed. Besides, by this point my pussy was begging for more, I was desperate to be filled by his hard cock. Adam didn't disappoint. As soon as I was on all fours his hands were on me again, pinching my nipples, caressing my inner thighs as he started to kiss my neck. Then to my delight his hands reached my already-dripping cunt and he teased my clit. I moaned with pleasure again.

"Please," I heard myself beg. "Please I need you inside me."

"I love to hear slaves begging," he said gruffly, biting down on my neck.

Abruptly he slid his rock hard dick inside me, filling me up, and then he started to thrust, slowly and deeply at first as I writhed in pleasure, desperate for another thrust. His speed quickened again and again as he was getting closer to orgasm and I felt my insides tense as they do when I'm close to coming. My clit was still being stroked whilst his dick continued its relentless attack on my g-spot. Suddenly the pleasure pushed me over the edge and I cried out as a tidal wave of euphoria washed over me as I came. Shortly after Adam too groaned as I felt the explosion of his orgasm inside of me.

He slid out of me as I collapsed onto the cold floor with exhaustion.

"Slaves are expected to ask permission before they come. Don't forget that next time," Adam remarked.

I lay there on the floor, breathing heavily and looking forward to next time.

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MasterGramMasterGramover 8 years ago
I liked Your story keep writing 😎

It turned me on 😈

bigdaddygr33nbigdaddygr33nover 8 years ago
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hope you write more sad way to end it I just want to know what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Intriguing story with a good start

Overall, I think this story was good - and am curious to read what happens next. I think your descriptions of what the narrator sees is well done. My constructive comment is to write a bit more about what is going on in her head. We know what she's seeing, but we don't know too much about what she is thinking. We learn that she thinks of escaping, but doesn't when she thinks of the first girl's punishment. But we know nothing of her date with Adam - what was her impression of him then? Did he drug her drink and she passed out? Did she voluntarily go somewhere with him then he knocked her out? I suggest developing both her character and Adam's character more. For me, an integral part of enjoying a story is to care about what happens to the characters - and I find it difficult to care without knowing who the characters are. By developing them more, I think they'll develop into "real people" and the story will be even better for readers.

nit2gethernit2getherover 8 years ago
slow down

I liked the idea you had for the story. I wanted you to describe her so I could have that mental picture of her while he used her. It seemed you rushed to get it posted. Slow down and enjoy telling the story that seemed obvious to me was in you imagination.

Have fun writing. I hope you write more. Good start Keep it up.

littlenymphylittlenymphyover 8 years agoAuthor
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Sorry some of you don't seem to be enjoying the story as much as I'd like but as this is the first erotic story I've ever written I don't think it was awful. I wasn't entirely sure what category it would fit best in but since kidnapping was the main theme I thought the reluctance part would be okay, especially as I've read other stories in this category along the same kind of lines. In future I'll keep an eye on what category I choose and make sure it 100% fits in the right place.

To the anon who said "And the sexual part needs a lot of work. Not erotic in the least. Bad story telling and wrong category." Can you give me a bit more information as to why you thought this or what I could do to improve? Telling me it needs a lot of work but providing no constructive criticism isn't going to help me work on it.

Thanks for the positive feedback from others and I appreciate any constructive criticism given :)

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