Best Friends Ch. 01

Story Info
A girl develops an interest in her father's friend.
928 words
3.25
76.8k
10

Part 1 of the 5 part series

Updated 10/05/2022
Created 10/12/2010
Share this Story

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

Chapter One

We pulled into my dad's neighbourhood around six p.m. It was winter time, so it was miserably dark, cold, and particularly unwise to drive on the roads. It was my dad's birthday, however – December 17th – and I promised I would come to his house, snow or shine.

I must have been wearing a sour expression, for my mom said: "Come on, honey. How bad can this be?"

"You divorced him," I said. "How bad could the marriage have been?"

"Touché," she replied with a chuckle. "But you only have to see him once ever so often. And it's his birthday. I'd certainly be crushed if you didn't come to my birthday."

"But you shower once a day and believe beer isn't a staple drink," I said sarcastically. Part of me felt bad for being snarky to my mother, but I would have preferred going to the salt mines than going over to my dad's.

My dad was your typical lower-middle class slob. He worked as a pipe fitter for some local construction company, and when he wasn't working he was drinking beer and watching sports on television. I honestly wouldn't be so opposed to him if it weren't for his stupid attitude. He usually pretends not to know things or feigns forgetfulness sometimes, but I know he knows. Like, generally, when I go over to his duplex once a month for my obligatory visits, he would ask me how school was goin', to which I'd respond it was going well, to which, unfailingly, he would add: "What was it you were takin' again?" He pretends not to know so we have something to talk about.

I do love him. It's just harder to do so sometimes when he acts so much like a narrow-minded dumbass that I want to throttle his neck or swap the beer out of his hand. But the last time I talked to him he sounded so tragically crestfallen that I didn't plan on coming over to his house for his birthday, so I promised his lost puppy-dog voice that I would.

"It's only for the night," my mom said, running her hands over the sides of the steering wheel as if she were rubbing by arms to comfort me. "If things get too unbearable, I will come get you. I just won't be impressed by it."

"I'll try," I said. I kind of sounded like a stuck-up ungrateful brat, and I felt bad about it, but trying to be more respectful towards my dad was like asking me to qualify for the Olympics next month. I couldn't see him in a positive light, so I certainly couldn't be positive myself.

We turned the last corner and mom pulled the car over to the curb. "Here we are," she said with finality. I sighed.

"Remember, just call me—"

"Okay," I cut her off. I grabbed my overnight bag from under my seat and opened the door of the car. "You'll come get me tomorrow morning?"

"On the hour."

"Thanks, Mom."

"Take care, honey."

I stepped out and shut the door behind me. As I swung the bag over my shoulder, I looked at Dad's house with narrowed eyes. The lights were on in the living room, but all seemed dead quiet inside. Typical of him to be alone on his birthday. But I suddenly felt a stab of guilt pierce me as I realized again that my dad was just a lonely old man looking for someone to accept him. I sighed to myself a second time before I marched up the sidewalk to the front door.

Just as I tried the door handle, Mom drove away. It was locked, so I knocked on the door impatiently. I didn't hear any movement inside.

"Shit," I muttered, digging into my overnight bag for his house keys. I didn't have these until recently, when Mom made the argument that I'd get locked out of the house one night while he's gone somewhere, to which an explosive argument ensued until I affirmed that I wanted my own set of keys. My mom had to nag him to death, but I eventually got the keys and access to his pitiful little home.

It took me the better part of a minute to dig them out. I finally fished them out of my bag, and just before I stuck the key in the deadbolt, the door opened for me.

A string of curse words flared in my mind – good for nothing, lazy, dick-head, ass – until I saw a stranger standing behind the door.

My immediate conclusion was that I'd somehow climbed the steps to the wrong house. "Oh, sorry—" I started, stepping back to glance at the address.

"Hi, uh... Sarah?" he said.

I glanced back at him out of surprise that he knew my name. He was tall, maybe around six foot, and his head was shaved, save for a thin layer of black stubble across his scalp. He was wearing a plain wool sweater, simple blue jeans, and a large novelty belt buckle that read: "TEXAS WHISKEY". His skin was the colour of butterscotch, and his eyes were a deep shade of chocolate.

I hesitated for several seconds before I could muster any sort of reply. "Um... yeah."

"I'm Doug, your dad's friend," he said, switching his beer bottle to his left hand so he could shake with his right. I took it tentatively as he continued, "Your dad had an emergency, so he asked me to wait here for you."

Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
11 Comments
triptoceylontriptoceylonover 13 years ago
Good topic -- intriguing with enough mystery to pique the reader's interest

I wouldn't worry about some of the comments, particularly when they're negative and offer no hint of how to strengthen your story. I liked the pacing of your story, it allows the reader to slowly crawl into the minds of the characters so that when the relationship is consumated, you understand both the guilt and desire.

becccabecccaover 13 years ago
Came to a screeching halt

Your story was promising to be interesting until I came to the line: "he was a typical lower-middle class slob." As someone who considers herself blue collar I found that quite insulting. I won't be reading this story.

RecHikerRecHikerover 13 years ago
Everyone has to start somewhere.......

I read the beginning of your story (Ch. 1) and then read the comments which have been posted by others. I want to encourage you to continue your story knowing that you've already posted chapters 2 and 3. I will read them once I finish this comment. You have chosen an interesting story line which I feel can be developed into multiple chapters.

Please remember, it's easy for an anonymous person to leave a negative comment because you have no way of knowing if they have posted a story which you can use to judge their story skills.

2275jr2275jrover 13 years ago
getting in to the story line

so far so good this seems that it going to get horny the more i read this.

story so on to the part where erotica takesover

catman71catman71over 13 years ago
a start

a walk of a hundred miles starts with one small step, so the step has been taken, i hope to see the rest of the journey

Show More
Share this Story

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Similar Stories

Hadley's Cherry Teenage gymnast offers her virginity to her Dad's boss.in First Time
Comforting My Neighbor's Daughter I fuck my innocent neighbor when she comes to me for comfort.in Mature
My Boyfriend's Dad She dreamt of being fucked by her boyfriend's dadin Mature
Hadley's Other Cherry Ch. 01 Jack introduces his tiny teen gymnast to anal pleasure.in Anal
Babysitting for Daddy A babysitter is deflowered by an older man.in NonConsent/Reluctance
More Stories