Beyond the Pale

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dtiverson
dtiverson
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But, I had a plan.

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It was a gorgeous July day, and we were watching a pretty, brown-haired coed, eat an ice cream cone. America had survived Korea, Joe McCarthy, the Vietnam War, the Flower Power Revolution and Richard Nixon.

It was the Country's Bi-Centennial and a former Michigan football player was the President. Mavis and I were hanging around the Belleville American Music Festival. The locals called it BamFest. It's an annual event, and it features some pretty good blues. So, the college kids, from nearby Madison, come in herds.

Mavis was as gorgeous as ever, in her 56th year. The only thing the three babies had done for her figure, was increase her bust size. And, she still had those shapely legs and supple ass. But her glory was her stunning face, which remained wrinkle free.

I nodded in the direction of an early twenties kid. He was making his way through the crowd. He looked tentative and uncomfortable, like he thought he didn't belong there. He was a good-looking lad, tall and muscular, obviously a farmer, not a college student.

Mavis squeezed my hand lovingly. Then she made a bee-line for him. She plucked at his arm and said flirtatiously, "Could you please show me where the food trucks are." She put a lot of her legendary heat into the request.

The kid started to point, then he took a good look at the woman who was asking the question. Mavis was old enough to be his mom. But nobody's mom EVER looked like Mavis.

That gave the kid a better idea. He said eagerly, "I'll take you."

What the heck!! It was worth it for a fellow to go a bit out of his way, if he got to spend time with such a remarkable woman. As they walked off, Mavis turned back to me and gave me a big wink .

In the meantime, the girl finished her ice-cream cone and wandered off in the direction of the parking lot. She was clearly looking for her friends.

And so, the kid didn't stumble into the girl. The girl didn't spill her ice-cream cone. There was no apology. There was no instant attraction. There were no dates, there was no marriage... And, I was never born.

EPILOGUE

Ava Jensen stopped in at the Hot Spot. She was beginning a tour with the Joffrey next week, and this was her last day in town. It was rare for a 21 year old Wisconsin girl to succeed in the big-time world of professional dance. But she had worked hard to get there, and she believed in her own destiny.

Ava knew that she was adopted. the Jensens couldn't have kids. But they had nurtured and loved Ava like their own. And, Penny Jensen's wisdom and encouragement had created the beautiful, intelligent and highly accomplished woman that Ava was today.

Dot, the octogenarian who owned the Hot Spot, was sitting in the back booth. She was there, with a much older lady. That woman was somewhere in her nineties. But, the shadow of her rare beauty still lingered, like the ruins of a particularly exquisite and graceful classical temple.

Ava had the passing thought, "I'll bet my birth mother looked like her."

Ava had come to the Jensens very early. She didn't remember her birth parents, or the circumstance that had brought her to the Jensens. But, sometimes she felt like she had lived two completely different childhoods.

The older woman was named Mavis. It was one of those antique, old-lady names. Mavis had been married to the former County Sheriff for seventy years.. He had just died. Their marriage had served as a beacon of hope, for people who still believed that lifelong romance was a possibility.

Mavis and her husband were very rich. The Sheriff had an uncanny ability to invest in unheard of businesses - who would then go on to become legendary corporations; like, IBM, McDonald's, Microsoft and Apple. It was almost as if he could see the future.

Nevertheless, even with all of their wealth, the Sheriff and Mavis had lived their entire life in this humble little town. They had raised their children there; and they had always treated Ava like she was one of their own brood.

Ava had been particularly special to Mavis. It was as if she was her surrogate great-grandchild. That was why Ava wasn't surprised when Mavis waved her over to the table.

Mavis said, "Before you leave town child, there's something I need to tell you." The old woman was physically delicate. But, she still had commanding, china-blue eyes; that radiated an unconquerable spirit.

Mavis rose shakily from her seat, and her driver assisted her out to her car. Ava slid in beside her. The ride to the Sheriff's huge estate was silent. It seemed like Mavis was formulating her thoughts.

The estate took up the entire bluff outside of town. The house itself, was a replica of a classic Victorian mansion; even though, it was actually only thirty years old. The vast lawn was bright green and meticulously tended. There was the sound of a lawnmower somewhere under the hot July sun, and Ava could smell the newly cut grass.

A little creek ran past the base of the house. There was an intricate iron bridge over it. But instead of going toward the house, the old woman turned and headed up an immaculately manicured path, made out of cedar chips. It led to a secluded grove on the top of a little hill, above the millpond.

The two women sat on the marble bench next to the Sheriff's grave. A giant willow-tree embraced the entire space with its characteristic limbs. The air was full of insect noises, birdsong and mild summer breezes.

Mavis looked in the direction of the monumental grave-marker. She got a soft and loving look on her face. The marker had both the Sheriff's and her name engraved on it. The only item left to be filled in was Mavis's date of death.

They sat there for a minute, Mavis was old and frail. Ava was sleek and vital, like a big cat. Mavis was at the end of her life. Ava was just entering her prime. Ava's face was exquisite, black hair and blue eyes. Her extraordinary body was honed by hours of rigorous dance training. Yet, there was something inestimably similar about the two of them.

The old lady turned toward Ava and fixed her with an earnest, almost pleading look. It was as if Mavis wanted to convey something that was profoundly important to her. Mavis said with deep sincerity,"It was fate that brought the Sheriff and me together, and I know that destiny will reunite us. I pray for that every day of my life."

She sighed and said with heartfelt relief, "It won't be very much longer."

Then the old woman paused. She took both of Ava's slim beautiful hands in hers. Mavis's hands were spotted with age. She said, "Fate is fickle and sometimes its twists and turns are hard to understand, or accept. But, you can't alter the way the cards are dealt. So, you have to play them the best you can. That was what your father and I did with you back then, and that's all that we expect from you now. We are very wealthy and we love you very much. So, you will be taken-care-of for the rest of your life. I just wanted you to know that before I passed on."

Ava gasped. She'd sensed it all along. There was no explaining why. But, Ava knew that the whole thing was true. And, she was overcome by the wonder of it all.

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ViolentKnightViolentKnight9 days ago

The best story I've read on Literotica so far. This needs to be made into a movie.

5 stars are just not enough.

a_reader_from_germanya_reader_from_germany24 days ago

I've read this story for the second time now, as well as the first part. I like both of them, but a few elements make it difficult to suspend the disbelief. For instance, Mavis, a young school teacher in a rural area of the US of A of 1946 is living together with a boyfriend and nobody cares?

Mavis has two black eyes courtesy of Jimmy, but she goes out, wearing her best clothes ("dressed to impress") to meet Jimmy? Let's recount, at that point in time she has already met the Sheriff and was on a picnic with him and Dot. She feels a deep connection and the Sheriff told her she could come to him anytime with any problems. We are also made to believe that Mavis is highly intelligent? Compared to what, a goldfish?

The Sheriff later on prevents his parents from meeting each other, so he is never born, still he continues to exist as the person who entered the story in 1946 as a 32 year old guy.

In a universe where time travel is possible, the parallel existence of one person in two different stages of aging is possible, too. The consequences are speculative. But if you go back in time and prevent your own birth you create a new future and you and your offspring (Ava) will not be part of it. There's no way around that. It's all but a thought experiment. Next to a plethora of written scifi, including H.G. Wells' The Time Machine, published in 1895, you could always refer to the film trilogy Back To The Future. If you create a fictition and abandon logic, all you've got left is chaos and volatility. That's what we find in this tale. The Sheriff's parents never get acquainted, he isn't borne, still his daughter Ava is borne, but she no longer lives with her father, who originally only disappeared when she was in her early twenties, instead she is adopted as a child by doc what's his name and his wife at an undisclosed age and under undisclosed circumstances- get my drift? Huge gaps and inconsistencies, impossibilities...

OldmantruckerOldmantruckerabout 1 month ago

Just as good as the first.. thought maybe their daughter would of made the trip too. R mavis would show bk up in this x line.. butbthis is your story. Not mine r someone elses.. loved it.. me.. cant write worth a crap! But i Do love reading the diff storys here. You folks are dang good 4 " amatuers" big Thank You to All of You writers, and piss off to those that Think they can do better.. if so... Wheres Your storys🤷.. if ur like me. And Cant Write.. then zip it with all the negitive comments. Cause your also Not an " editor" .. .go buy yea a " gd story " ovr at barnny and nibbles" that'll make yea happy... Anywho.. so much 4 my soap box moment.. thks DT.. hope you hang ard so we can enjoy YOUR storys., 🤷💯💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍👍👍🙉🙈🙊😉😁🙋🙋👍🍺🍺🍺🍺🍕🍕🍕🍕

rlrmiller1951rlrmiller1951about 1 month ago

And, I was never born.

And. I was never born. This has to be one of the all time greatest punch lines ever written.

SeaChangerSeaChanger4 months ago

It's tough to manage slips in time.

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