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Click here"Well…" The sheriff had had enough of Graham. "She wasn't under arrest, and volunteered to go help you, sir. If she wandered off, it's not a felony. Can't pick her up for leaving her things on a bus, now. At least, that's how the law works here in Plano. Detective."
Graham is pulling out of the lot. "Have the bag here by 5 CST or we have a much bigger problem than a skipped witness, Sheriff. Goodbye." The clipped Chicago accent is twice as dismissive. Graham is often rude, though he is not aware of it.
At the station, he maps out the area Ruby could have run to by now, and calls the State Police to arrange an APB. The bag arrives at 5:15. Forensics has it by 5:30, minus one piece.
The blue notebook sits in Graham's briefcase, waiting. He brings an extra pair of latex gloves home.
- COMMENTS
mojo_catover 16 years agoAuthorI appreciate that! It's my first time writing in this genre and I am really glad to have the feedback. In the next bit, I think the detective might be a bit more creepy than the killer...who's to say?
Comments are really appreciated and thank you so much for yours :)
Anonymousover 16 years agoYour insight into the intellect of a sociopath is kind of creepy? scary? Which I guess is the point. Excellent start.
