by TheTalkMan
I like the wsy the story is written. Anyone whom has had sex can understand the repitition. This was a very hot story. It is one of my favorites. I would like to see a folloeup story with mom coming for visits frequently in a hotel and perhaps a girlfriend his mother approves of and threesomes.
AVOID THIS STORY
It's a rambling crock of crap
Written by someone who has got plenty of time and self importance.
Why only tell the story in 8 pgs
I'm sure you could've stretched it out to 12
Excellent story. I am sure I have read 500+ stories and this is the best ever. This is also the first one that I have ever commented. I will most defiantly be checking out your other stories.
I love how you play with narrative elements like foresight, that help to drive the plot forwards. Thoroughly enjoyed this, don't mind the sour critics below haha.
Nice. Where's part 2, and could you make a story , where you go into detail, about the first time he gets her ass ?
So absolutely red hot, I absolutely adore cunt in every way, with my tongue and my cock. The more I get the more I want. Simply love to get drunk on cunt juice, then fuck said cunts brains out. Cunt lapping sex maniac U.K..
Wow! She took every inch of that beautiful cock. I admire such determination. If that isn't a mother's love for her son, I don't know what is! She took care of all his needs. Shame she didn't take that huge rod up her ass. A mother can't give her son a better gift!
A second part with more dress, and more tit fuck, descripction of the tit fuck please
Feeling my cock squeezed in her pussy and knowing she loved that fullness in her kept me hard during the entire read. Thanks.
Oh. come on now, "Well, that's a whole other story..."?? This was a Hot, very erotic, and sometimes funny exceptional indulgence and that's how it ends?? Well, maybe it's best to leave the rest to our imaginations. But I would have loved to have read how dad was found out to be indulging in some extramarital fun with a co-worker or better, a co-worker's wife, maybe. 5 stars from me and this goes on my favorites list. (10/26/2021)
Absolutely pure cock and cunt lust, love that, pity that there was no cunnilingus, I would be wanting to get totally drunk on her cunt juice as well as drunk with fuck lust. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s UK.
You mybman make the best milf characters on thiss site. At least one of the best
Pretty sure I read the same story from another person and matches word for word I think. Other one maybe less pages
Man, what a ride. I haven't decided whether I would like a part 2, or just imagine what MAYBE will happen to mother and son. But I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing
Momma Kim has big tits, sonny boy Kyle has a big cock. OK. Got it. But, eight pages???
Actually, Kyle is an obnoxious bully and an asshole and Kim is a cheating, oversexed slut.
These two sure were full of themselves, and they both 'smirked' a lot.
Ho Hum.
YES, WE KNOW, you're going to screw your mom, or at least you're going to talkman us to death that you're going to. I'm trying to think why you mention it 7 times on the first page, like you earned it.
If I were a hot mom, and my son couldn't decide between me & a PS4, I'd trade him in on a better model that wouldn't make me feel so ashamed & desperate.
I read one page, and that's all it took.
Like RACFGUY said, "yawn."
Please God no do NOT publish a Part II. This was tasteless enough as is. Quit while you are behind pal.
Enjoyed this story. Hope there will be a part 2 at some point. Where they go with this new level of relationship will be fun to follow. You don't say how old Kim is-she could be anywhere from mid 30's to past 50-but given the non stop flood of sperm in her pussy, it would be not out of the question for her to get pregnant at some point. If they were screwing almost every day for a whole summer, given the amount of semen Kyle was dumping inside her, it's not out of the question.
I enjoyed it. I don't think I can do better. I'm not posting this synonymously because I have the courage to put my name behind any comments that I post.
Great story and very well written. Ending was a bit weak though...felt like a life long romance, not a summer fling.
I love these incest stories a real turn on I. Wonder how much of this realy goes on
Don't think they can ever go back to the way it was!
Great story, great build up, characters, fun and fantastic sex. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
Not into incest but as a sex story as I read it a man and a woman who just got really hot and dirty it was great
Best one ever damn wish i had the chance to have been that way with my mom iv seen her naked an i should have just whipped it out an let her have at it
No story needs and deserves a second part as much as this one. Really hope you decide to continue it down the line.
I wonder how they’re going to tell the kids that their mom is their grandma and mom while their dad is their big brother . This story kinda reminds me of my boss and her son her boyfriend a real scum bag he lays around doing nothing one day I was at her house and she and her son were down in the basement while I was in the kitchen going over some important paperwork I was going to get approved by her I heard moaning coming from her basement next thing I knew after I got shifted around the company for the winter months my boss was pregnant she gave birth five years ago in 2019 she gave birth to a baby boy that looks more like her son then her boyfriend they named her son Kyle. Just the other day she talking about her pregnancy wieght so now I may have to go through it again wish me luck hopefully I won’t have to help her give birth like last time
If you ever write another chapter dont carry the story as much with your writing it made it sound forced
You did a great job with this story. Truly hope there is more. Thanks for sharing
We all know where these stories are going, it is Literotica after all, and that's why we're here. So we all know that by the end of the story, mom and son are gonna fuck like bunnies.
But for some strange reason that I can't fathom, when the story starts out by telling us that they have already done the deed, so to speak, and this is just a "flashback", I tend to be less interested. It's like I missed the story the first time, and I'm only getting it secondhand. Like knowing the result of a football match before you watch it.
I know they're going to fuck anyway, but it feels like I'm out of the loop, getting the retelling, instead of being there to see it first hand. It takes me out of the story, and puts me on the outside looking in.
Is it just me?
Where the hard working dad throws the spoilt slut and worthless narcissistic son out on the street. Then the slut has to sell herself on street corners and gets pregnant by hobos. And she tells the braindead jock that it's his, while making him lick her clean.
That way, the honest hard working dad can meet a loving new babe, who introduces him to her equally horny twin sister.
It's a win/win for everyone.
Did you use the word ‘fuck” more than various synonyms for big boobs? Both were over used,
OK, so now it gets interesting. So I hope the author picks this story up again. The easy, predictable part has been written.
Great story, but this begs for a whole other story. A continuation, a part 2, an answer to the question asked. If for nothing else, so this story is not left hanging......waiting....
5🌟
Had to fast-scroll this one after a couple of pages. Real people don't carry on a full narrative dialogue while having vigorous sex. That's just a lame porn video thing. In realism, it just seems stupid and SHOUTS IN ALL CAPS how fake everything is at every moment. Then you have them repeat the same remarks back and forth about the exact parts of each other like you forgot they just said it a paragraph earlier in the same sex scene. Less IS more. There is a potential quick-and-dirty stroke tale of maybe three pages buried in all this repeating. Shame really...
I loved this hot 🔥 sexy story ☺ 😘 .. please write a chapter 2 .. where do their lives go from here ? 🤗
Lost all interest early, when we're told she's married and the son is more than happy to cuck his own father with this skanky cum dumpster of a so-called wife.
Loved the story with very little guilt feelings. I always like that. After all Literotica stories should only deal in no holds barred fucking and fucking. These are all fantasy right? No need to bring in any guilty or other emotions. And, as for what happens after a mother and son spends a whole summer fucking? Well, they keep fucking every chance they get with the inevitable consequence of the mom finally getting impregnated by the son and putting the blame for her baby bump on her husband. That should be the climax.
This was so good. Just pure carnal desires .
would really like the next chapter of this story.
ill be patiently wait for the next chapters.
Thank you
Well damn that was a solid read. I liked the style it was told in. It would be criminal not to answer the damn question though. Gives us a part 2 please :)
This was fun, but too repetitive at times. There’s only so many comfortable ways to fuck & after they’ve done them all it was repetitive again.
Bill S.
Still one of the very best to this very day. My 3rd time reading this literotica M/S classic. Gets better every time
The most exceptional Literotica sex story I have read here in three years time. It so wonderfully captured my own long sexual relationship with my own mother. A real nymphomaniac and the most sexually charged woman in my life. Insatiable in every respect of sex. She couldn’t get enough of my 10 inches.
Very nice, I enjoyed it. Especially his mom's jealous rant during their first time.
2nd part should be where she gets pregnant and then over the years they have like 5 or 6 kids
Incredible story!!! Loved it! Please write a part 2. And she should get pregnant and want him to get her pregnant
Excellent and hot story. Can Mom move on or does she start chasing young cock amd turn her husband into a real cuck with all the young guys (and hot mothers) in the neighborhood? Or does she visit Kyle's college every chance she gets? The possibilities are endless.
Enjoyable, but I couldn't accept that he did nothing for her other than dicking. Not much of a man, really, just a big penis on an otherwise useless brat.