Blazing Success

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"Great idea Fergus. I'm dry. Sorry to get your back up."

"It's okay. Apology accepted. You've been working damn hard for me."

Fergus came to Blaze's office two days later, grinning hugely.

"Internet subscriptions for your magazine are being snapped up as if they were for a new model iPad. We've had to switch people to help with the processing."

"That's great."

He asked what was the lead for the next issue going through at present.

"Probably something that will land us in big public debate and oh dear, people will have to buy our magazine to read what this is all about so sales will boom."

"Cut it out Blaze. Just tell me."

"In brief it discusses how to get DNA testing, the cost and the likely accuracy, to check whether both of your parents or just one of them are your real parent/parents your birth parents are you always were led to believe."

"Oh Jesus."

"Careful on your reaction Fergus. My job prescription clearly states I'm to produce hard-hitting articles that are accurate, relevant and possess high readership interest and I'm to accept controversy fearlessly. By the time you return to your office the article will have been emailed to you."

Blaze sent the email and then phoned Steve. "If I get fired or resign would you still wish to marry me?"

"Of course."

"Thanks. Bye."

Fifteen minutes later Fergus called Blaze.

"The legal team and you are correct in your opinions in my view. It's an excellent article, in fact a brilliant article and you are to be congratulated."

"The three of us named were the writers."

"Well the three of you are to be congratulated. Please Blaze, try not to make me an old man before my time. I really do need to keep tighter supervision of you. You have a sharp brain and sharp teeth."

"I'll have my guy set up an encrypted link with you so you can look at any time to see what we are putting through and you can also view the pages ready for proofing."

"I wasn't intending to have that extent of supervision."

"I know so just think twice before interfering. I'm doing this to avoid you growing old before your time Fergus. I like the way you are."

Blaze called Steve again.

"Sorry I worried about being dumped unnecessary. My job appears safe. I'm no longer anxious about my future."

"You've already got my thinking about marriage."

"That's fine. Remember to let me know when you have reached a decision. I would like to marry before I turn thirty."

THE END

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8 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Omigod

I cannot bear reading omigod again. Physically painful

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

i dont get it wheres the sex scene

HoneydewyHoneydewyalmost 13 years ago
To the most recent anonymous comments

i respect your right to your own views, but as your comments made me reread the author's story to find out what the hell you were referring to, I still find your all your allegations groundless about adultery etc. Maybe I come from a more pragmatic background... But I really find his stories refreshing. I didn't much like them in the earlier years, but then either I matured, or his stories seasoned... I think his rhythm is jaunty rather than choppy. He is a talented writer and i got carried effortlessly to the end.

On a prosaic note, whilst I think the author is capable, I am not yearning for more of the same character. Unlike a very few stories whereby my breath catches if that's all there is to it and I want to see more of the same protagonist? Maybe because your closing paragraph was too fitting and hung on a note that satisfies already without keeping us on our toes in anticipation for more...

HoneydewyHoneydewyalmost 13 years ago
I just had to...

Register an account and express that the anonymous comments made by someone else were too much like a personal attack and that although I read your stories more for inspiration rather than to get sexually in the mood, your writing is in no way choppy.

I sometimes root for the 'underdog', and whilst I don't believe you would appreciate it, here's a standing invite to dinner and certain friendship in Singapore! Would love to just meet u to see how different or similar you are to my impression of you from your writer's persona?

Ym: H.dewy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Hard to read, not a romance

The dialog was choppy and a lot of words were not something people would actually use in conversation,

Also this is a romance not loving wives. Adding cheating and a main character that would not hesitate to cheat if the mood hit her killed the whole story for me.

She's not trust worthy, she's completely shallow and selfish. Simply put she's not likable. Maybe move this to loving wives and ave her turn into an insatiable slut after marring Steve and cheating on him.

Besides who's the romance with here? It was that hard to follow. Is it Steve? Rachel? The old guy?

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