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Click here"So I'm like, what do you want? And he was like, I just wanted to apologize and stuff like that. And I was like no big deal. Carl told me about what happened."
"He did?" I stopped breathing.
"Yeah, Carl told me you spilled champagne all over the bride! Too funny! Anyways like the Mark guy really want to apologize or something. Oh yeah, here." She handed me a slip of paper. "He gave me his number so he could apologize to you directly. How bad was it that the husband has to apologize?" She asked.
"Umm, I didn't think it was all that bad." I said I fingered the slip.
"You should call him. I don't want him stopping by again and have Greg find out. He's such as asshole."
A few days later I sent a text.
"I heard you wanted to apologize to me. H."
"Jenny?" a text came back.
"You can call me that."
- COMMENTS
Jhbrown27over 4 years agoHelen (Jenny) is going a long way in life. She's smart, flexible, and funny as hell.
HappyKittenover 9 years agoAuthorThanks so much for the feedback Simon. This is my first attempt in writing something other than a dissertation. In fact, I hoped it would help in pushing through my writer's block I have been struggling with the past week. Hopefully in my next attempt or shall I say my next writer's block, with guidance of readers and other well versed Literotica writers, I will be able to produce a more fulfilling story.
xx
Kitten
Anonymousover 9 years agoHappy,
You did a great job with this! Keep writing. I didn't realize that the girl was Asian until well into the story. It would have helped to have a few details about her earlier. I know that the "Asian thing" might be a cliche kink, but your story is so matter-of-fact that it would actually help to know a little more about her.
Simonsays13
