Carrie and John Pt. 04

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Carrie then stood up and ordered John to his feet. "You cannot be seen at any time for fear of causing suspicion," she warned, "I intend to move you to another place where no one will find you, but for the moment we are in the beach house and you must be careful not to be noticed. Follow me and I will take you to a room you have not seen before."

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greenman440greenman440over 5 years ago
off the rails

Oh great, here we go into total unbelievable fantasy, Had enjoyed the first couple of this series then the plot just got too far fetched.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Aaaaaand you just lost me. OK, not true, you lost me at making him run naked then taking everything he owned and his work. But I thought you might pull it out. Good writing, ridiculous concept.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I like the way this is going!

This is very well crafted, and John is one lucky guy.

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