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"And refer to us as your masters!" Michal calls out, before the two begin a theoretical discussion about the spells Geoffrey's been using on me, which would be very interesting if it weren't about me.
- COMMENTS
GigglingGoblinalmost 10 years agoI'm a bit confused as to why she didn't hit one of them while she was free.
Shame this won't be continued—I was looking forward to the character's escape.
Anonymousover 10 years agoNot bad, but seems incomplete. She's caught and toyed with. Big deal. Where's the escape and recapture? She's smart, why not give her a chance to get even, or turn the tables on them? She has no friends among the villagers? How about the guy she helped earlier? Can't he be a hero? And wouldn't she reward a hero?
Andromeda7over 12 years agoClever story and well written, I'll be back for the next episode. Thanks.
MoriMasterover 12 years agoLiked the story. I hope you keep at it. Although, personally, I think more should be put into character development. I barely know anything about any of them except what shows from the off-putting lack of empathy that could have some interesting events and ideas behind it. Other than that the writing is decent, I didn't notice any grammatical/spelling errors, and the eroticism is well done. ;)
