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Click hereI paused, and told Danni to turn over. She did so, laying there on my bed, on her back, her legs spread, and she looked at me. She was as overcome with lust as I was, and I could see in her eyes she needed my cock as badly as I needed her pussy. I gripped her legs, and pulled her to the edge of the bed, where she lay back with her legs open and waiting. I moved her legs apart further, and holding them I entered her again, thrusting into her deeply. Danni had a hand on her mouth, keeping her curses quieter, the other pinching her nipple desperately. I moved a hand from her leg, and started flicking her clit while I slid into her, and suddenly her body tensed up, her legs stiffened and she gave a long, low moan. I stopped the flicking but kept up my thrusts, needing to bury myself inside her, feeling the walls of her pussy suck me in, hungry for more.
Danni looked up at me, her body still being shoved into the bed by mine, and whispered, "Cum for me."
Seeing her like that, covered in sweat and asking for my cum, brought more energy from me, and I pushed her knees up against her chest, climbing onto the bed with her, and pumping into her even deeply than before. My balls began to tighten, my cock expanded, and Danni moaned "Yeees!"
I pumped to the hilt, held it there, and came, my head rolled back. Danni lay prone too, her eyes closed, a constant moan being issued from deep within her, while her pussy and legs quivered. My cock spasmed, it spat every drop of cum my balls could spare, deep into Danni's clenching pussy.
After a few seconds, I grabbed her legs, and pulled myself almost out of her, thrusting back inside with a desperate need to keep our bodies connected and pulsing. Danni gasped, her orgasm still cruising high, initiated by mine. I could feel her gripping my cock, giving it lasting sensations.
I slowly fell forward, onto her body, and there we lay for several minutes, calming down from the storm of passion. She slowly stroked my back, while I breathed into her chest, getting my breath back.
"Ha, I told you it would be better."
"Yes," I laughed back, "Yes you did. And I think we should test it more often."
I looked up at her without moving, seeing her eyes sparkle. My cock had softened, but was still inside her, bathing in our cum. I flexed it, and Danni jumped slightly, smiling.
I moved up, kissing her gently.
"What did you think of the film, by the way?" I asked her.
"I don't remember much," she replied.
Fine series, with a feel of reality. Sorry the promised sequels haven't appeared, but maybe not too late.
at best it needs a total rewrite slowing things down and spreading them out, you need more background and character development. or you could just delete it and stop writing as is you suck at writing.
I really liked this story... so far. (Hint, Hint.) I can't think of anything else to say; the first commenter just about having said it all. I just felt the need to add my $2.00 (Inflation over $.02) worth.
I'll be looking for more, so please keep writing. ^___^
I liked this story a lot and want to read more about this darling couple. Character development is flawless and the plot perfect. Danni seems to be the perfect sister to a perfect brother and I want to know both of them better. Their growing attachment and sexual attraction just makes the reader wish he was part of the picture. Thanks.
i feel the best thing you can do is to totally rewrite the story building up the plot this was way to rushed. what you wrote in three chapters should be two or three times longer and be spread out over months not weeks. people do not rush into these things especially when they are so conflicted like he was. take your foot off the gas and do a rewite get a good editor to help you along.