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"Alright, men. You know what you have to do. Everyone fall in behind McDuffy. Form a line. I want quarterbacks first, then d-line, followed by o-line. Next receivers and tight ends. After that, DBs and running backs followed by safeties and line backers. Callahan, sorry buddy, but as the kicker you're bringing up the rear. Come on men, fall in."
Still eating up her brother's and father's cum Alexis watched as the whole team made a line. McDuff started off by rubbing her breasts and pinching her nipples, just like coach had taught. The Palmetto Christian High School football team had seventy-three student athletes on it. That is seventy-three cocks, 146 balls, and about three gallons of hot cum, all of it about to be deposited in Alexis Kelly, daughter of the head coach, and the biggest whore in the entire school.
- COMMENTS
Shoukoushiover 4 years agoReally liked the concept, but the execution fell a little short. Coach is a little too demeaning in his speech, at least to me. Humiliation is great, but as the other comment essentially said, this isn't exactly that. It's just... complete disregard. And the daughter turned from normal to nympho sub too easily, too quickly. To me. But if this works for you, more power to you
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoWanted to like this, but the humiliation aspect goes too far. It's tough to read as a female reader knowing that this viewpoint about women/girls' bodies isn't too far from the mainstream, and an actual justification of male rapists. The setting and context is humiliation enough, in a hot way, but the "all women are whores" thing is a bit too real to get off to. Even if you just axed the coach's weird speech, it'd be a much better story that's hot for more people.
