Coney

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He looked at her, exhausted, and as if he didn't recognize her. As he leaned against a chair, he muttered almost mechanically, "You . . . strumpet . . . you . . ."

Tears began to roll down his cheek. Emma found herself feeling sorry for him. He had spent all day desperately trying to find her. Despite his flaws, she knew he loved her. She took him by the hand.

"Come on Johnathan," she pulled him behind her out of the police station and toward the crowds heading toward the departing trains. She wondered if she could show him the way to cure her hysteria. If not, she knew she could find the one person willing to do it for her.

As she stepped into the train, she felt the roller coaster rumble the boardwalk under her feet one last time.

THE END

**Thanks to Rex and Gus for taking so much time to edit this story and make it much better than it was originally! Sorry it took so long to publish, guys!

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
So well placed in history, so original

I love reference to The Awakening! I also love that her experiences are so honest! Like this man smells like a swamp but I'll deal since I probably don't smell like a bouquet either! 10/10

lgustosmiolgustosmioover 3 years ago

Read it again, just as good, exciting, and enjoyable as the first time. Still a beautiful tale.

DDanielsDDanielsover 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks Gunhilltrain!

I appreciate the compliment on the story. It means a lot!

gunhilltraingunhilltrainalmost 6 years ago
Wonderful historical details and a great story.

Unfortunately I didn't see Coney Island until it was well past its prime in the 1960s. Steeplechase was the last of the big parks to close around 1964.

DDanielsDDanielsalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks, Yogi!

Your comment is quite the compliment!!

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