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Click here"It was great for me too," she murmured into my neck as her hand slipped down to my groin.
"Tell me what you want, Shelly."
"I want you inside me. I want you to make love to me just like you did the first time. It was perfect."
"Any special requests?"
Silently, she looked up at me in the darkness. She couldn't bring herself to say the words ... to tell me how she truly felt. Instead, she kissed me, and with a sigh, lay back.
As always, my thanks to Erik Thread for his helpful and insightful editing.
One doesn't need a high "IQ" to evaluate the ignorant ramblings of an uneducated coward such as "Anonymous 06/09/12". It's true that most writers submitting to Lit. are not on par with Sam Clements or Ayn Rand and I am sure that coaster2 would agree to that. However, I already have extensive collections of those fantastic writers. I read good stories by good writers like coaster2 for relaxation and enjoyment (and a little titilation also, LOL).
Mr. Anonymous, if you prefer the type of "stroke stories" more suited to your lower "IQ", please don't clutter up the comment section with your poorly crafted efforts to demean someone with far better abilities.
de Jay
If you lack in any or all, how can you judge a writ? This particular 'creation' is a piece of shit. One of the really bad one. As such it deserves 1* !
As one of those "Arrogant, Over-Educated, Published, Pieces of shit" that I've seen getting the living hell kicked out of them/us on here, I've not often commented. THIS story, my friend, is very good. Really, VERY good.
It finally got erotic! Her fan never came back?
Thanks for your hard work.