- Loving Wives
- Covet
- Page 5
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As I sat by my darling wife and propped her feet into my lap and gently massaged her feet as our children, whom I had adopted watched TV with their cousins who moved into Jeannie's old house which she had given to her brother. The contented sighs from her pleased me as I got a smile from her. It was the smile I got when I was in for a special night.
Of course, every night with Jeannie was a special night as I smiled back and continued to rub her feet.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 days agoToo far fetched and it seems the writer has stretched credibility to create a happy ending.
Anonymous9 days ago1-star. MC is kinda clueless, wimpy, and a closet cuck. Every attribute I hate. He knew exactly who he married. Remember, you can’t turn a ho into a housewife.
waifabout 1 month agoI love Oshaw's writing. While this story did not reach the level of Equation and Fortune, it was still a fun read.
Anonymous2 months agoThis story is a mess. Denise being with the MC when she is from money and using him for what little he made doesn't make any sense. No one else even caught that? Or the fact the children belonged to the affair partner? Or this pathetic chump didn't even yell at his cheating wife and his kids for their betrayal? Then he just walked away like a loser? Disappointing story it could have been much better if the characters showed any kind of emotion.
BodyThiefByTheBay3 months agoI would have him suing for back child support and paternity fraud.
In addition to that, I want his first kids to have lost their support for tuition for college
For the in-law from hell, she lies her standing in the community because she known as ground zero for spreading syphilis Amber herpes in the city
tsgtcapt3 months agoWell, can't say that I agree with the naysayers; but, what would I expect from anon posters? The named posters I agree with... excellent story and storyline. Thank you.
Anonymous3 months agoI enjoyed the story. I will say I am disgusted by his "kids." Even if Paul is their biological father, Mark raised them. For them to turn on him so fast means they have little to no morals. Also, Denise is so bad from the start I can't imagine he was surprised by her betrayal.
Anonymous4 months agoSeems to me that poor Jeannie is just a prop in Mark’s fantasy of revenge against Denise, with whom he is clearly still obsessed. I did like the details of the restoration of the house, though.
Anonymous4 months agoStory went so far off the rails to create Pollyanna that it now is just a mess of factoids without a clue.
Anonymous5 months agoOh dear, someone doesn't quite understand that you can think something is shit without having to be able to build, make, create, write, paint or film it, etc.
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This story is objectively bad in a number of areas. While that doesn't stop the reader from enjoying it. It does stop it from being higher than average.
