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Just an incredible story of hot guys coming to terms with loving man-on-man sex! Confusion, exploration, lust, sex, skinny-dipping, romance and even a three-some to boot! Wow!
Is this the same Josh that got to know Peter? In the story like fireflies ? How ever both stories were good, can't wait to read the third one
What a wonderfully romantic and erotic story. Very well written. Once of the BEST I have ever read.
Why the hell, did'nt I read this sooner? You absolutely rock Xaviermayne
I personally think this has indy gay romance flick written all over it, with a lot of porn thrown in there of course. You are one hell of a writer, and I hope you write a real book/novel someday or already have, because as amazing as reading this was, I want to read more from you, a whole lot more.
Reading this it all felt so natural, the humor in your writing style is what won me over, and I normally don't like humor in writing like that, but the way you wrote it was great and felt so, so sincere. I really loved how used the sarcasm, and I feel like every time you used it was the right time to use it. And you made all the characters so fucking believable, Josh, Calvin and Reese of course, but Aunt Emily and even Dolores who is just mentioned as well, and you also made them very distinguished, which is most evident in the small sweet moments that captured them all.
This was not at all what I expected when I began reading it, it was cute, it was sad, it was joyful, it was sweet, and it was so very, very hot, but most of all it was real, and I love it all the more for it. :) <3
your stories are so great in that their not just sex but true lives we would all love to live. you have movie material in your stories. please keep up the good work,can't wait for the next one Thanks
i really wanted josh and calvin together they both clicked together lot more than reese as couples.
so want that calvin and reese play the cupid for josh in the next story.
really this story made me sad as i was dreaming for josh and calvin to be together at the end and thought it was cute and sweet as calvin really was clueless in everything.
RIP....
Is someone cutting onions in here? Sweet Jesus. I hurt for Josh. I'm glad to see another story for him which I will immediately read after posting this comment but still...he was a good guy. I hope he finds a good one in the next story and that Reese and Calvin play Cupid in that one.
3rd wheeling that beautiful relationship, I felt sorry for the guy.
What praise can one add to what has already been stated in previously written comments?
The plot unfolds as each of our lives actually do, (I loved the "asides" made by Josh to the reader!). The development of each of the characters is true to life. In my opinion, the reader knows people like the characters, (or at least I do), and can relate to them. Hence, the reader truly cares about the characters and what happens to them. This is what makes a book a "best seller", films or plays a " smash."
The author, Xaviermayne, seems to have thought-out the storyline in extreme and very careful detail before putting pen to paper. Also, the author has written the story more than extremely well with each character skillfully introduced and their personalities skillfully written, one step at a time, as if the reader is getting to know each one as person/friend in real life. The plot does not drag anywhere in the storyline. It unfolds incredibly well, especially without the use of gratuitous sex scenes. This leads the reader to become very anxious until it's time to go onto the next page to see what happens next.
Bravo Xaviermayne! May your career as a writer be a long and profitable one, (since you are now a legitimately published author in novel form). I look forward to purchasing your books and I especially look forward to having as much enjoyment reading your new works as I have this story.
With my very best wishes for your continued success,
Durnin
Amazing story. The conflicting emotions it stirred up was 5 star stuff... I only wish it worked out for the 3rd wheel. i could never be that gracious. More please,
So.... this has brought out more emotion than I thought possible. I came onto this site for something different, and I certainly found it. It's the perfect combination of romance, lust, sex and fun. There were points that I wanted to yell at the characters, that I pined on Josh's behalf, that I laughed at the witty comments and swooned over the romance. I couldn't tear my eyes away. You're an amazingly talented writer. Please, share your wisdom!
Re: the comment below: That may be the nicest thing anyone's said about my writing. When there's no shortage of free porn on the web, that you would pay for my stories is just such a great compliment. Thank you. And I will continue the Josh story, I promise! I love him too much to leave him alone.
Again, thank you. You made my day.
All the way through I'm sat here thinking, 'I've read novels a lot less well thought out and edited than this'. Eventually I catch myself not caring about the smut aspect of the plot line as much as the character development. Two minutes ago I bought a published work from the same author on kindle... Thank you for leaving this piece accessible for free, I hope it brings you many more fans.
I've written a new story about how Josh spends his Valentine's Day, called "The Accidental Cupid." It's been published by Dreamspinner Press as part of their anthology "A Valentine Rainbow." It, and my other Dreamspinner titles, are available from my page on the publisher's site: http://www.dreamspinnerpress.com/store/index.php?cPath=716
If you've enjoyed my writing on Literotica, I hope you will consider buying one of my published works. Thank you for your support!
~xm
That was an amazingly written love story that defiantly tugged at my heartstrings. It was a beautiful story that showed how true love can transcend all obstacles when it is given to the right person. Well done and keep up the good work.