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"So, as you can see, we're all making sacrifices for people we love. Dad, it's time for you to propose to Paige."
Amanda looked at me, wistfully expectant. I rose to my feet. Paige appeared, drying her hands.
"Paige, will you marry me?"
She lunged at me, answering with her lips.
- COMMENTS
bruce22over 14 years agoto have read this story. Full of interesting people and situations. Obviously, in real life nothing would have worked out, but in our fantasy world, all is well.
SW_MO_Hermitover 14 years agoI have liked this story but was becoming frustrated with it because you drug it out so much. I like your writing but you seem to have too great a tendency to fill your pages with things that do not add to the story. Your characters are really well thought out I feel except for Amanda. She seems to be a little too mature for her chronological age but...Now, just two or three more installments to tie up the loose ends such as the final distribution, seeing that the two trouble makers get their come uppance, and the marriage and you will have completed a great story though. I only gave a 75% because of the length of the story and the lack of substance in some of the installments.
Anonymousover 14 years agothis has been a very delightful journey through some interesting peoples lives, keep up the good work REGADE, i look very much forward to your next effort, you have a devoted fan in me, thank you
dirtdigger1955over 14 years agoIndeed! Brian should have shared his troubles, totally, with Amanda months before. She sure could have saved him not only time and money, but loads of heartache. Great story!
