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It was like entering a different world. This had to be the living quarters: quiet, plush, calm. Ian continued with her down a short corridor, into a small studio living area and directly into the bathroom. The room was already warm and steamy from the running shower. Ian gently guided Megan to stand in the warm jets of water. She instinctively reached up to start washing her face.
"Hands down, Ms. Baylor. I've got you. You took your discipline admirably, now let me get you cleaned up." His words were firm yet comforting to her which left her confused. Megan simply nodded. Ian spent the next half hour gently washing every inch of Megan's body and hair.
"Why are you being nice to me now? I thought you were mad at me." Megan finally uttered in a hushed tone.
"No, Ms. Baylor, I was never angry with you, nor would I engage in punishment or pleasure in such a frame of mind. Disappointed? Yes, but I assure you I was not angry. Now let's get you finished up and back to your cell."
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Lost_in_translationover 8 years agoAuthorHang in there folks, I promise I haven't forgotten about my readers! That crazy thing called 'life' has kept me on my toes as of late but I'm not finished with this...not by far!
Thanks for the great comments! Keep 'em coming!
LIT
Anonymousover 8 years agoI like the duality in the story between the two leading females. Looking forward to more! So nice to see an erotic writer with a decent vocabulary as well.
If Anonymous above doesn't like kidnap/nonconsent, they shouldn't read it :)
-Cat
Lost_in_translationalmost 9 years agoAuthorI do appreciate the comments and enjoy hearing the from readers, both positive and negative. Please keep them coming. Your opinions and comments validate what I'm doing and hearing your thoughts is helpful. Thank you again!
annikasfuryalmost 9 years agoI love this story. It's got a nice steady build up, and your writing is refreshingly skillful. The girls are hot and the villains are villainous. Best of all, I can already tell that this won't be a magic-dick story. There's a ton of them on Lit, stories where one good rape make a girl go Oh! What a great orgasm, this guy(s) aren't so bad. It's always a little insulting and disappointing. I'm betting that they will have many wonderful orgasms, that can't be helped, (by the girls I mean, you can't help physical responses to stimuli) but it will be a take some time and mental and physical manipulation to break them and shape them into willing participants, IF they ever become willing. At least I think it will. I'm just speculating because I'm excited about the story. It's your show, and I'm a huge fan of your writing already. I can't wait to find out what happens.
