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Click hereThey'd witnessed the two grownups in their lives have a fight. It was more important that they see us 'making up'; if we'd any differences, these had to be patched so the kids could feel secure.
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bruce22over 8 years agoThe Family hug was great but in my opinion there should have been a bit more tension before the resolution. Strictly speaking i have never had someone organize my "things", but my daughters are champing at the bit to get me organized.
Anonymousover 10 years agoto show no one is perfect and to show just what their priorities are.
Good job.
Softly Whispersabout 19 years agoAnd yes, it's non-erotic and yes, it's sweet and tender and well written, (a few verb tense errors now and again) and yes, I puzzle why you would put such a delicate work on here but I'm glad I found it.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoI love the story. It is completely unrealistic but it is great reading. In the real world ,unfortunatly , you just do not run into altruistic, loving successful doctors who take on an entire family and support them financially and emotionally without demanding something in return.I wish such a world existed, but, alas, it only exists in fiction. Keep on writing, please. 60 year old George
Anonymousabout 19 years agoAh, Rabbitrunner - - - Many in this world get high from pharmaceuticals, adult beverages, and assorted mind-bending stimuli. You have developed a new form of addiction called your stories. Waterwalker, Sexmate, JDSeller and I, the humble prof, are obviously hooked bigtime on the stories you create. Thank you for chapter four. I am all smiles and perhaps a bit teary, mostly perhaps because I feel you are illustrating the good that permeates the bulk of the human race, but is not often heard about. Write on, good sir, we all await your next installment.
Prof. Ramstein
