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Click hereJack scrubbed a hand over his face, and caught the lingering smell of the woman on his fingers. He grinned. "Yeah, they're pretty unbelievable."
Stay tuned for stories about the No-Tell Motel and the Starlight Lounge.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 17 years agoAfter a while much of the stuff here reads the same.
You actually have a creative plot with a twist or two!
Great Job!
duddle146over 17 years agoMan heading for home after two weeks on the road picks up a will of the wisp pale woman on a strange stretch of highway.
Things progress nicely including a little rest stop for - well - you know the rest! Strangely Hot!
Anonymousover 17 years agoHello,
Your story was very different in its approach and very creative. I actually laughed out loud a few times and its refeshing to see someone who knows how to use a spellcheck. There was the odd cliche, but no harm, no foul.
