Dominated by My Twin Sisters

I prefer just Lana and Lara fuck each other with strap-on in risky situation.

I'm actually surprised by the scoring of this story. With the amount of negative comments written, something doesn't seem to correlate.

Have to agree with previous comments.

No way a virgin ass is going to take a big ten inch cock forcefully thrust in without damage.

Your writing is good, your content is a little fucked up.

This was definitely abuse and her asshole was probably torn and bloody. Probably some hemorrhaging too. They deserve some prison time for sexual assault tbh.

Sorry, I wanted to like it, but it’s completely unbelievable. I bailed at page 2. A young sister doesn’t decide to French kiss an older sister after a few drinks.

Lana and Lara are just narcissistic bitches. They focus only on themselves and each other. Their younger sister was more of an irritant that prevented them from enjoying the delights of teenage life. They have no real sisterly feelings for her. They left home a long time ago. Ellie was just a little girl. There was too much of an age gap. No shared interests. They took her as their new toy.

The twins deserved to be punished.

They are lawyers and need to be careful with them. The sister signs a mutual consent agreement with them and permission to engage in sexual acts.

Ellie ties them up and brings the soccer team to them. Lana and Lara are brutally fucked in all holes and in different ways. Everything is recorded on video.

And then we can talk and set the rules. ;)

The beginning is very good. When the twins start abusing their little sister, the story becomes very ugly.

2*

Horrible. Looks more like Abused by my twin sisters.

This story takes every opportunity to ruin all its considerable potential with narcissistic, sociopath, fake ass domme twins who, despite having a great sub, fail to present any real ground rules, disrespect her for no good reason, and rape her. Fail.

Clumsy

amayzing story and it was great from start to finish would love to see another story with the little sister taking revenge on her Twin sisters somehow i just feel she seem more dominant then them.

An interesting romp through several erotic and very pleasurable fantasies. I agree with the comments about consent, aftercare and believe the story would have been improved with their inclusion, but it does not greatly affect the overall effect of the story. The action moves well and the ideas and dialog are also satisfactory to get the ideas across and engage the readers imagination and participation. This perhaps could have been broken into a series of smaller events or chapters. Each could have played into her mind as she surrenders more and more to her sister's desires and her own needs. A lot of territory covered, but a nice diversion.

"Incestuous lesdom threesome" is already a hot concept on its own, but adding orgasm denial put it over the top for me.

I was, however, taken out of it by the total lack of attention given to consent, aftercare, communication, and in general actual BDSM practices. Like, when she woke up after passing out when they finally let her cum? That was the time for aftercare. "Cuddling on the couch with milkshakes" would have been very good if they'd cuddled her, given her a milkshake, and talked about what they'd just done and her feelings about it. Instead, they immediately started domming her again and pissed in her mouth without ever talking about if that was something she was okay with.

Really enjoyed this story. While thinking about my own sister. Which tonight she is in for a good workout in bed. With me and mom tonight

This could almost go in Non-Sexual.

Sure, there's sex, but it's delivered in such a cold, clinical way that I didn't even get a little bit wet.