Dream Shadow

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Unearthly entity takes me while I sleep.
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She came to me last night, again. I closed my eyes for what seemed like a second and I was in her world. I could see her in the distance standing there beckoning me to come to her. She is a powerful creature she is not to be denied nor would I want to she has a supple skin very pale almost glowing, dark eyes that pierce through all my facades right to the core of me she sees me naked ,helpless, defenses down and yet I am not uncomfortable i am secure knowing that even through all my flaws and impurities she still comes to me. She floats on the air lightly dancing and smiling her wings are black as the night singed on the edges from dancing to close to the fire she is neither angel nor demon she is a child of the shadow born of darkness but not ruled by it. I approach her slowly gazing upon her. No story has ever described a creature so lovely she spins in the air teasing me my heart is pounding my throat is dry as I get closer she settles to the ground ,wings out ,showing me how impressive she is .Her impish smile on her angelic face.

I fall to my knees in awe of her she approaches me puts her hand on my chin lifting my head telling me to stand she takes me into her embrace I am lost in her ,my senses overwhelmed, my hands come up touching her face.

I grab her hair and tilt her head back my mouth finding her neck my lips parting I placed my kiss on her slowly at first I feel her body press against mine the passion rising. My hands clenched in to a fist holding her hair tight I can feel her hands on my back her nails digging in. My lips pressing harder my teeth biting into her neck her moan was not of this earth her nails dug in so deep I could feel the flesh give way as I felt my teeth pierce her and could taste her blood.

I pulled back looked into her dark eyes I could see the raw emotion boiling inside her. I closed my eyes and placed my lips on hers I felt them part slightly allowing me access, my tongue darted in sampling her. Her breath was sweet, slightly reminding me of the flavor of melons.

I feel her wings encapsulate me wrapping me in her embrace I can't describe the feeling at all, feeling like I was inside her totally. She wouldn't let just anybody this close I was hers as she was mine.

As I stood there with her, tangled tongues and lips, heaving chests, she grabbed me and threw me to the ground, stood above me wings spread.

I just love the sight of her, as she lowered her self on me. In one move I slid inside her, her hands went to my chest as she rode me my hips meeting hers thrust after thrust I reached up to kiss her she shoved me back to the ground with her hand on my throat eyes never leaving mine she continued her onslaught on my body.

I felt my orgasm nearing I tried to hold off to make it last longer but it was as if she could read my mind and did everything I wanted. I grabbed her hips forcefully kept slamming in her. I could hold out no more I let out a scream my seed spilling out inside her womb it triggered her own orgasm she buried her nails in my chest trembling I could feel her muscles spasming she continued to ride me jerking uncontrollably until her orgasm subsided.

As I laid there looking up at her mesmerized watching the sweat running in little droplets between her bosom down her stomach she leans down as if to say something, her wings blocking out the light, in total darkness I feel her lips part I know she wants to tell me she loves me, she wants me for ever, I pray for it my heart beats with the anticipation I crave her more than anything I try to see in the darkness find her face with mine.

I then sat upright sweat pouring off me looking around found myself in my own bed. I laid back a single tear in my eye wanting to be with her so badly my hands went behind my head under my pillow I felt something...

Pulling it out ,I held it to the light one single black feather and in my head I heard her telling me to hold on that we would be together one day....

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dielectricdielectricabout 11 years ago
Enjoyed the imagery

I really liked the story. The imagery was unique and intense. I personally didn't have a problem with the grammar. I thought it reflected the male character's dream-like 'stream of consciousness' experience with the shadow entity. Cool stuff. :)

HedgeWitchHedgeWitchabout 16 years ago
harsh!

I enjoyed the read and the emotion was lovely, but an editor might help. I see great potential, and we are here to make suggestions to HELP not belittle. Tsk, tsk. Keep trying and remember, find a good editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Learn how to write

It was torture trying to get through this story. You really need to take an English Composition class or two before you inflict all your run on sentences and thoughts on the rest of us. You try to be descriptive but stumble all over yourself in the effort. I don't think even the classes would help, because it really takes years to develope an attractive style. Sorry to burst your bubble, but keep on trying if it makes you happy. I'll not be subjecting myself to your mess again.

Your submit comment page even has errors on it. First error--"buttom" instead of "button". Second error--"you" instead of "your". That probably isn't your error, however. Fault for that probably lies with literotica.com.

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