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Click hereShe finally seemed to be coming around as the exquisite sensations of her orgasm dissipated within her lush thrumming body. As she looked at me through half-closed eyes, she seemed to become aware of my cum clinging to her face. I watched intently, wondering how she'd react. I saw her wet red lips part slightly as her tongue slid slowly out, the soft red tip discovering the warm gobs of milky fluid all around her mouth. I felt another delicious jolt go through me and I watched wide-eyed as her long wet tongue moved past her parted red lips in a slow sensuous circle, my creamy white seed clinging to her tongue as she moved it all around her open mouth. With her tongue totally coated with my pearly cum, I watched as she provocatively drew her tongue back into her mouth and closed her pouty red lips. Her eyes closed and I could see her savoring the new sensation of my warm cream in her mouth.
"Mmmmmmmm," she purred warmly and I watched as the muscles in her neck contracted as she swallowed. Oh fuck, I thought to myself....my own mother had just swallowed a mouthful of my cum! I had just cum twice in a row, but I knew I was not done with her yet....not by a longshot. This education of my beautiful busty mother still had a long way to go.....
The story is developing at an appropriate pace. Although this is an incestuous love story between mother and son, in the back of my mind, it feels like the son is playing his mother.
Your overuse of certain words like "lewdly" and "voluminous" is distracting.
"Tracts of land"? Really? A Monty Python and the Holy Grail movie reference?
Also, it might just be me, but I also hate using "tit-flesh" anywhere. It's a contrived descriptive word that's supposed to sound sexy but it really just sounds stupid. Kind of like saying, "I massaged her neck-flesh" or maybe, "I sucked on her big toe-flesh" or maybe even, "She liked it when her left-crook-of-the-elbow-flesh was caressed." I'm sure many readers are breathing much quicker after seeing those examples.