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Click here"Fuck you."
I can't stop the grin that spreads over my face. I brush his cheek with my fingers and he jerks his head away. Delightful. He is still fighting me, even now, and he still has the strength to. I am really starting to enjoy this one.
Chancey hisses. "My Lord."
I look up at him, annoyed. "What?"
"His eyes, My Lord."
Surprised I look down and my heart jumps when I see the flicker of red behind his pupils. Can it be... can it possibly be...?
"His eyes are not your concern Chancey. Get him to my room within the hour and I will worry about that. No... I think I will be gone longer than an hour. I don't want him left alone, not for a minute. Stay with him no matter what."
"What if he...?"
"You can be sure that he will not." Aqua's eyes have closed again but the red flame remains lit deep within him. It calls to the one within me. I shake my head to break the spell and turn. At the door I pause. "There is a boy out here. See he is cared for. I have taken very little from him but he will need... relief."
"Yes My Lord." He knows the score.
I know this is an older story but I really enjoyed it and plan to read the other chapters as well. Being a huge fan of horror, vampires, and the supernatural this one really speaks to me. Well done.
I know grammar. I have no clue what Lo-Pan is talking about. Jealous maybe, because you got it right? This is one of the best written stories I've found on Lit. It's not perfect, but nothing ever is. You rock, girl, and I'm gonna keep on readin' -- Love it!
Lo_Pan "I love to concept". Do fire your editor darling Lo_Pan, they are letting you down. Oops, my mistake. That's you, isn't it?
Just to let you know that Chapter 2 has been out for AGES but it hasn't been approved yet.
I've sent in Chapter 3 too.
Thank you so much to everyone who has read and review. I am fond of this story and the characters.