All Comments on 'Family Affair: Backseat Sister'

I love all those ideas. Not to sure about the dad liking dick but that's just because that's not my cup of tea. Do whatever you feel is best!

This is a very hot n sexy story, like to hear more of them

I know now I need a good banging after reading this hot story.. I'm out of breathe from coming so hard with them.. ummmmmm

Crazy threesome, lez cunt munch, and swapping tents would be nice to read

Good story. You are my favourite author btw. Would like to see him fuck his granny as well.

Son with huge cock finds sister; Mom, and three female co-worker at a bachelorette party in a nudie bar, with lots of cash to spend. Dancers, co-workers and sis and Mom start with giving him free lap dances and winds up in an all out orgy with cum dripping down everyone's thighs.

I have not looked yet, but I am hoping there is more to this story. Very well written, great taboo subject and future possibilities! 5 stars and now a favorite!

Congratulations for another job very well done!

I really hope that you do continue to develop this story line, although I believe that you could just omit the "Daddy Loves Dick Too" theme. Part of the reason for that is personal - am not a fan of gay porn. Admittedly, that's MY constraint. But the other reason is that it would stretch the bounds of believability too much for me. It's far more believable to think that a heterosexual family could be FFM (mom, daughter/sister with son or father) or MMF (with father, son and daughter/sister or mom). Adding the male-male element seems to stretch things too far. Just my thoughts on it.

Nevertheless, this is a well-written, HOT story and is left wide open for future development. Looking forward to Chapter 2!

X-Man

Just keep it him and sis . I hope they have a great time sharing a tent . Give her many creampies .

This is ab awsome story u should continue it

This does not require a continuation. It's a hot fantasy, not a riveting story.

Although making more fantasies with the same characters could be hot too.

I think you should make a continuation where mom and sis fuck Phillip.

on a familiar theme

the twist with mom watching was completely unexpected

The mom was a surprise, it was a nice one. I liked the story it got me good and hard.

THAT WAS REALLY HOT. I HAD A BIG SMILE ON MY FACE AND I DON'T KNOW WHY IT REMINDED ME OF THE TIME I CAUGHT MY OLDEST SISTER FUCKING MY OLDER BROTHER JUST AS THEY FINISHED AND SHE FIGURED TO DO ME ALSO TO KEEP MY MOUTH SHUT, lol THEN OF COURSE I HAD TO TEACH MY YOUNGER SISTER HOW TO FUCK ALSO. GOOD MEMORIES!

THANK YOU silkstockingslover THIS MADE MY DAY!

You should do a second chapter, where the mom can't stop thinking about it and ends up seducing the son

I always this is a very hot premise, but in standard form it's pretty much been done to death. You, Jasmine, have found a genuine new development - well done! Of COURSE we all want a second chapter, to further unpack the new relationships between Philip, Mum, Tanya and Dad, and to enjoy your well-written descriptions of loads more wonderful red-hot fucking!

Vince

I loved your story. My girlfriend and would love to read more about this story.

We can't wait.

moms were really angels! most of moms allows their kids to have sex and candidly watching them in action.

You continue to just write more and more good stuff. Love it . keeps me Cumming for more.

I loved this story. I can't wait to see what happens in the future. I really want to read 'Family Affair: Orgy'

yes this story should be continued I want 2 know what else mom said ,

And there is something else needed to move and mom should insist on sitting in back with him, it is only fair.

Good story well written I liked the way the guy worked it so he ended up with sis on his lap . . .

Made me so wet! Well done.

If you WERE to make more parts, ALL of those would be good ideas XD

See title.

There is no "Gone with the Wind" idea here---even though you really have some interesting "hooks" set to continue the story if you want. I am always disappointed though when a talented writer yields to the temptation to just have everybody fuck each other. How many stories have we all read like that?

Anyway, resist the urge to try to write an American "War and Peace."

very erotic, well written,,moms always know whats going on,,

All of your possible scenarios sound good to me. I'd prefer that brother and sister continue, with mom knowing and complicit but not yet joining in.

Don't get me wrong on this, but you should let the story end here. As I said: don't get me wrong! Your writing is great, you create a nice atmosphere here and its a very enjoyable read, even though: I don't think you should add anything more. Why? Because the charm of the story lies within the novel experience of a brother discovering his love for his sister, this being a first for him and sex being a first for her, both on the way to be separated for a time, when she is heading for college. An additional chapter would not have that novelty. It would either be about having more sex with the sister (novelty lost), his mother joining in and such. Those would clearly be possibilities for you to follow, but I don't see this story as the start of such a everyone fucks everybody series. Also I believe, letting it end there, with the question of why the mother did react the way she did and what might eventually follow fits the story.

Now that Mom knows what is going on between the brother ane sister, she needs a little piece of the action. She could be in the bathroom pissing when he barges in on her and helps her finish peeing or sees her nice enlarged teats.

She decides right then and there she wants his cock in her mouth, cunt, or both.

So he now becomes a motherfucker and lets her have his cock on a regular basis. Mother encourages him to let er hold his cock when he needs to piss so she can play with it while he goes.

I think just leave it. Previous comment says it perfectly: novelty is now lost, and the only way to go it to have a big family fuckfest. And I and a lot of people would just be disappointed by that.

I enjoyed your story so much I want more. If possible please write all these stories you mentioned above... I'm suddenly your biggest fan so thank you for the multiple orgasms!

More silk for the mind to think on.

I agree with the thought of leaving this as a stand alone. It might be hot for mom to get into the action, but would really be unnecessary.

I could go for another sister story or two, they just dont seem finished by a long ways :) ...and while I usually dont like the parents included in the story, mom here doesn't seem so bad, maybe even the three of them after mom gets ahold of his dick a few times, hehehe.

Leave dad out of it. Hell, she's lusting after his dick for a reason, either she isn't getting any or what she is getting is not making her happy, or not as happy as what she just saw in the back seat could make her!

I dont have any interest in tent swapping, mostly because Im selfish and have no intention of sharing my sister! ;)

I certainly have zero interest in dad. Ugh. Not my cup of tea. Hell, if it was I wouldnt be reading this story, lol. Cause, you know, the only thing creepier than some guy poking me in the ass would be my dad poking me in the ass. Eww. Just sayin.

Have the sister decide to become a nun but keep her brother available to keep fucking his sister the sister.

I have been reading your stories since The Complete Submission: Series.

Have Phillip take his mom, not in a car. Right there on the that trip. Then having mom, son and daughter before she heads off to college. Leaving dad out of it.

this is the best incest story pls.continue the rest I can't wait to see how mother take her share of son cock and you can write the different series of it (family affair mum have our own share of it he son goodies).sunday2004life@gmail.com

Well done! There is so much potential for future stories in this family. Doing Mom on the way home or a lengthy side trip. Turning sis and Mom into hot sis and hot mom with his friends and neighbours. Mom sister action and through it all, dad remains oblivious. They do other relatives, co-workers, strangers, gangs, glory holes, complete debauchery

The story of Tanya and her older brother deserves to be played out beyond the back seat of the family car. More please between the two siblings before introducing other family members. 5-stars!

A sequel would be great to turn it into a romance rather than just a steamy encounter, but please stick to the siblings, or at the very least Do Not include the dad that would be a big turnoff.

I Loved the story and where you plan to go with it!

Really exciting..one among the best sisters/brothers incest,

So all your continuing ideas are basically orgies? Looking at your work it does seem ALL your stories end up that way.

Well I am a sucker for romance, so why not challenge yourself and keep it to just the siblings.

The sister to going to college and the brother has a dead end job but smarts, not unrealistic to think he could cram his way into the same one. The mother knowing instead of dragging her into it can instead help convince the father to let them have their own apartment.

Cliche yes but considering this entire story is recycled from Backseat Mommy I see you are not afraid of using them.

I know these are just stories, but it should be look like a real situation.ths family should have a introduction and the characters should have their own personality.the chemistry between two characters must and should be shown clearly .

Just keep him clueless let it be tween the sister Mom and son

It would be great if mom got into the act too.

Could end up being an intimate romance between the siblings with some fringe benefits for mom with sister's permission. Keep dad out of it for awhile, then maybe slowly include him in when he finds them doing something where he can't be a single entity anymore.

Mom and daughter don't need men.

In reality you could just continue as a series, this was a phenomenal read!

My Choice

I'm in favour of Bathroom Mommy myself

Great story, thx

this story was almost word for word of another writer's story, except that it was the wife in the back with the son who was on their way taking him to college and it was just the dad, wife and son. the car was loaded the same way

This is not plagiarized at all

Please leave the link to prove your point... thanks

The story they are referring to is yours.

Backseat Mommy: Long Hard Ride

I read it right before this one. Love both btw :D

...till Now ! That was quite nice in a lots of ways ! The voyeur stuff and then the ride ! Nicely done !

I also missed this incest story, and glad I found it. wow it was erotic to read.

This was a very well written story. thank you for all you contribute to Lit.

Otherwise it'll become just another boring familyfuck fest

in an extremely confined space and the smell is not recognized by the parents? Get Real. You might as well having them moaning and screaming through their orgasms and the parents remain oblivious..

I wish you would do a second chapter with MOM in the backseat. Maybe driving to Harvard to visit Tanya.

I know incest is illegal: However, I wonder how many times a Brother & Sister actually have sex and end up living together. Maybe not forever, but at least until they find their own special person. They develop a devotion and love to each other stronger than most marriages. I still enjoy these stories.

I love fucking my sister. Muhammad in Cairo

I know it might be a little late but i want all the suggested ideas to become a continuation and idk y but i find this quirky shit fucking amazing!!! Even tho i dont want this to happen w/ me and my family but w/ my future boyfriend (im single as a fucking pringle rn) and his family!!! But this story is fucking fire and i got ne off soooo fucking good soo fucking fast sooo many fucking times and sooo fucking hard

l always love these incest stories because its one of my fantasies,l want you to continue

Excellent writing. Love reading it. Mom curious would be nice sequel yes.

And keep it up. Don’t care if incest stories. It is fiction, but as said very good writing.

Had to read again

Just as good the second time

Wish you had another EPISODE

Great story...a bit unrealistic that the Dad could be that clueless, but it's a fantasy after all! Good buildup!

This is a great start of a beautiful story line, keep up the great work and I a looking forward to seeing more from this series!

Could definately do with a follow up chapter, love reading your stories

I would love if you make the sequel. Nice story .

Pretty great story. Can't wait for the next one

shame this story is dead id have loved to see the son take the mom and daughter from the dad

great story..amazing fantasy..yea..i think you should continue

Perhaps son and sister are forced to share a tent, mom is in the know and secretly listens in before accidentally being perved on by dad who takes her later only hinting at what he knows.

man this story rocks! me and my gf got off to this togther thx. cant wait for the next one

Would have been even better if Tanya had let him cum in her pussy. Next time, maybe.....

I really got into it. Wow. In my humble opinion, I think, and hope, you do continue this story. But, by the tone, I think brother and sister, intensely, should continue. Maybe mother listens in on brother and sister, masturbates and takes her passion to dad. Mother and daughter, with your good story-telling, yes. Son, sister and mother, yes. Dad, other than with over-heated mother (he loves it), no. Turning it into another boring, un-erotic family orgy story, would be a shame. This first story has heat, emotion, intelligence and humor. The sister, maybe confiding in a girlfriend is made aware of her bi-sexuality, experiments, likes it, shares friend with her brother... Forcing a sudden desire for her mother, on the sister, or the same for the brother, again, changes the great tone you started with. I know I'm a total nerd. Again, just my humble opinion.

Wow Mom!!

Love your stories

Mon should ride in the back on the trip back home...

...for boxes they can have someone at the campsite give them something to stash in the backseat

I love the mom and daughter switch places on the boy. Then mom and daughter tag-team him. If the dad is a cool kind of guy then let the daughter catch him jacking off or maybe skinny-dipping and get him. Then while he and daughter are busy one time, let mom join, then later while dad is doing daughter, mom and sin come in together and let it become a family orgy.

After that maybe the daughter has a friend or two with a hot mom and those women or maybe entire families could join in.

The sneaky nature of them fucking in the back seat was so hot, trying to be quiet when all your sense say to be loud!!! And then we his mom catches him cumming on his sister’s face is such a hot fantasy. I often fantasize about my wife walking in just as I cum on her friends face! I think part 2 would be great!! Maybe they end up staying at grandma’s a few days, dad has to take grandma to a dr’s appt and something happens when mom has a talk with her kids. Maybe she’s a closet voyeur and instructs and watches them, maybe at the end she takes her sons cock and jerks him till he cum on his sister again....

Please write part 2

I just love your two page formats, more Please.

Mom and son definitely need to get familiar with each other.

with a happy ending (so far) but think an additional chapter would be nice, where the son gets to do his Mommy, but not in the car, and gets to finish doing his little sister. Thanx for another read.

Please write all the sequels to this story!! I love it!!

Keep writing please. I can’t wait to see where it goes.

This was extremely well written and i love the story. I did see a grammatical/spelling error on the first page. Good job!

I really enjoy your stories. I became an exhibitionist and developed some of my kinks in a way that although much tamer makes your stories resonate. And make me painfully hard. Please write more

Thank you for an amazing story that made me wish it was me getting it on with my sister !! The intiment times of fucking with your parents so close by and then finding your mom knows !! Was there a possibility I could get it on with my mom ? My cock was hard all thru the story and as I said,,,, I wish it was me ° well done !! Well done !!

This is not an uncommon theme and I have read many stories along this line.

Once you set the scene to make it interesting. The event but what happens next?

You have bitten into the apple, now what?

okay what happens after dropping off boxes? they're on their way to go camping mom just found out what happens next? really should have a chapter 2 thinking mom wants some cock too the way she was looking maybe even wants to peak in the kids tent to watch again only this time being asked to join in.

Loved the story and think maybe the next chapter could be the bathroom with mummy at grans or mummy could take the back seat on the way to the camp grounds.

I WISH IT WAS ME FUCKING MY BABY SISTER 🤤🤤

family affair: covid lockdown

The whole time I'm thinking; "god damn helicopter parents."