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Click hereThat was when I discovered that I was riding a bucking bronco, because, once again Susan was having a BIG orgasm....maybe the biggest of the night. I would have to modestly admit that my long delayed orgasm was pretty spectacular as well.
As I said before — I suspect that anyone in that part of the motel was pretty well informed as to what was going on in our room. So much for the free breakfast in the morning — we were definitely NOT going to face our neighbors. Although, who knows, we might get some interesting offers...
It was late, we were exhausted and I was glad that I'd remembered to put the 'do not disturb' sign on the door. We began to fall asleep in each other's arms. Just before I surrendered to my exhaustion and sleep I thought about "breakfast" in bed and hoped she was too.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoThis is what happens when you use the excuse that you’re writing fiction. That way you get to truly make pathetic people from basically good people. Is there anyway that Ted and Susan can avoid looking in a mirror and living with what they see.
patilliealmost 7 years agoBut found this to be boring. Not much tension, dont anticipate tesolution. Joe is an ass who dorsnt appreciate what he has-so life lesson but damn i learned that in grade school!
teedeedubalmost 7 years agoI didn't see that coming. Pretty much out there. As Sean said, "Impossible, but doable"................ great read, thx........
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoOnly idiotic crap!!!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoFor the many who feel important with "Does anyone realize this is fiction?" A good read is a good read. The best fiction helps the reader suspend disbelief, especially in a fantasy. I won't be reading this writer any further.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoOf course the whole plot is tedious and contrived. Joe is bored and complacent, and cruel. Susan has been loyal and loving, but now has options with Ted, and others, due to Joe throwing their marriage away. He thinks he has just put the marriage on hold, but either you keep your marriage vows and commitments, or you are no longer married. Kind of a soap opera watching were this is going.
The writing style puzzles me, since the author throws in lots of pointless but specific details, which are distracting to a discerning reader. What with all the details about what they ate, where they sat, what they wore, the weather, the scenery, etc.? We had to be told not just that they ordered cocktails when they sat down, but that it was a "predinner" cocktail. Wasn't that kind of obvious, and, so what? They drove up the coast to wine country, had a romantic gourmet dinner, then retired to their room for some exciting and adventurous sex. The interaction with the owner and the waiter is just meaningless filler.
So Joe is a moron, and Susan has now lowered herself to her moron's level of virtue and character. Joe is responsible for his own stupid selfish choices, but Susan has now joined him as a married person ditching her vows and commitment. Joe cannot give Susan permission to fuck around on their marriage, Susan has made that choice for herself. Susan should have consulted with an attorney, and her children, and either decided to wait for Joe to wise up, or send him legal separation papers. Its obvious she and Ted have potential for a good relationship, and that would only be strengthened if both she and Ted allow Joe enough time and rope to either climb back into the boat, or hang himself, Joe's choice. With Joe acting like a dunce, and Susan and Ted acting like some honeymoon couple, the action reads like a cartoon.
I just don't understand how this becomes a multi-part story. Either Joe and Susan split, or they reconcile, while during the interim Ted is providing sex education classes. A profound and compelling plot.
Always a disappointment when a good author does not perform up to their potential.
sbrooks103xalmost 7 years agoI believe that while he DID bring the vibrator, BEFORE he plied her with wine, at the end of Ch 1 she said, “I am not going to miss out on the opportunity of having a wild weekend with you where you will make love to me, have sex with me, or just plain fuck my eyeballs out as you will,” so I think HER intentions were pretty clear, also!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoPostScriptor, this was a less entertaining chapter than the first one.
The sex scene was erotic, exciting to read.
Maybe you have a very good stroke story here?.. We will find out shortly ,lol.
AMerryman
