by StangStar06
No matter what you do you will never satisfy everyone. Just relax you always satisfy the majority, unfortunately the jealous ones constantly search for errors even if they don’t exist. Well done this is a great work of fantasy
Sorry. You lost me half way through the first page. I could see no reason to stay with her and no reason to continue with the story. He needs to find someone who respects him.
Geeze again with the comments what do u aholes want ? It has drama ? It has romance ? It even had a little part thriller. I just dont understand what is expected of these authors. Again sorry for the rant i guess the ahole comments piss me off more than u. But pls keep up the writing still working my way down the list enjoying the stories.
Boy meets girl.Boy marries girl,end of story.It doesn't need six pages.
Apparently a lot of commenters don't actually read the story before bloviating and trolling. 5 stars.
Funny, imaginative, lots of extraneous elements to keep it interesting, and most of all just a killer plot. Thanks dude, really enjoyed it! Five stars from me!
One of the very few stories that you've written that i absolutely do not like and the primary reason is that I cannot empathize with Eric at all. He's just a really unlikable guy. Priya isn't much better to be honest, what with her actively pursuing Eric even though she had a fiance - unless she intended at that moment to cheat, her intention would have just been to play with Eric feelings for her own gratification. Intentions matter. It's like that old trope where the hot girl asks out the nerd on a dare but then falls in love with him. Sure, it's great that she fell in love with him, but she initially went out with him to humiliate him. Only in mathematics does 1 - 1 = 0, for the rest of us, the hurt we feel taints the love we've received. That's just human nature. Overall the writing, as usual, is pretty well done, but the plot is a bad hallmark movie and the characters are all unlikable and rubbish. 2/5
Priya is sorry excuse for a human being. Eric is mentally unstable, what will he do when she cheats on him, and she will. Altogether a well written story.