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"Boyfriend?" Karla asked.
"Not yet!" Mei winked, took Ai's hand again and blew Karla a kiss as she headed for the elevators.
Turning, Karla caught Kenisha's eye and felt again how she missed being best friends. And as she thought about the growing numbers of women she was going to have to fight to get a piece of Philip she wondered if Kenisha might be a candidate too.
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My great thanks to Dan Kildall, John Wane & Michael for their tireless work to fix up broken prose with far too few commas. Thanks guys... your the best... or is that you're? ;)
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 8 years agoFirst of all thank you for the check in with Marketa. Her treatment of a world figure was great fun. Politicians fiddle while the world burns. I don't want to spend too much time contemplating those corrupt assholes playing with women like Marketa while there are children starving in the world. I'd overlook my aversion to your fascination with torture if you'd strap his worthless ass in that fucking machine for a couple of hours while Mei and Marketa whip him.
Your list of characters continues to expand and i don't know what you plan to do with everybody unless you intend to make this series 100 chapters long. I'm soon going to have to make a list of who everybody is. You seem to be due to post chapter 27 so if you can keep all these characters interacting, I'll keep reading.
I'm actually hoping that Mei recruits a small army of sisters and turns Philip's life into a real Chinese fire drill and drowns him in female drama until he takes Ai and locks the two of them in the shop. I'll leave that in your capable hands.
Nice job.
Anonymousover 8 years agoWell Asiantoy, you've done it again. Hot stuff.
I love the psychology of it all and you demonstrate an encyclopaedic range of knowledge; from appropriate and wide ranging metaphors to science and cultural. You're a pretty smart young lady.
You have far too few readers.
G xx
Anonymousover 8 years agoThank you for a really well written story. I enjoyed reading those 24 chapters over the weekend. Now I just hope for more!
JasonRTayloralmost 9 years agoYou convey so much depth in so many ways! From the joy and innocent-then-raunchy zumba scene to the gradually mutual appreciation between the menfolk (ok, pretty one sided, but at least P doesn't despise T).
I was a bit shocked at how Mei really is recruiting - and quickly - and the various interplay between the four women with their 'mis-matched' massage partners.
This is quickly becoming one of my all time fav stories, thanks so much for sharing!
J
